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Old 08-06-2004, 05:06 PM   #1
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Asian Lady, Andrew Suryadi (2D)



Title: Asian Lady
Name: Andrew Suryadi
Country: Jakarta
Software: Painter And Photoshop

Hi, this is my latest work done in painter and photoshop, I really want to achieve a photo real look for this one, but it seems fail so deep.
So a crits and comment (advice) for this one would be very..very appreciated.

Thanks for viewing.
 
Old 08-06-2004, 09:31 PM   #2
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It looks great.A few suggestion I can make : make the line where her hair splits less contrasting. The highlights in the hair are a little strong and don't really follow the angle of her head. The lighting on the left side of her face seems to make it more 2D to me, I would fade the highlight more on the left lower side to express the slight appreance of a cheek bone. I would also shadow her necklace more so that it doesn't stand out quite so much.
 
Old 08-06-2004, 09:50 PM   #3
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Nice. I like the soft glow around the character.

Perhaps, to achieve more realism, sharpen the lines/add more contrast between the parts of the character; for example between her chin and neck.
 
Old 08-07-2004, 05:11 AM   #4
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ah, you're right. Thanks for pointing that, alfaeus.
 
Old 08-07-2004, 07:36 AM   #5
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Hi, MichaelVH, Thanks for the suggestion, I really need that. Any other suggestion are veryyy welcome here. Thanks
 
Old 09-26-2004, 10:11 PM   #6
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She has such a lovely expression and I really like her eyes for some reason. I'm very bad at doing realistic cgs, but one thing that I think might help you making the pic look more realistic is add some 'imperfections' to her face. Right now her face is very smooth, but people don't have perfectly smooth skin with no wrinkles and stuff. Also, you might add a bit more definition on the lower part of her hair because it looks a bit block right now. Other than that, I think you did a wonderful job on the drawing.
 
Old 09-27-2004, 02:45 PM   #7
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HI Chenchen, Many..many Thanks for your advice, I'll try to improve it in my next drawing. THANKS!!!
 
Old 07-29-2005, 09:06 PM   #8
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Good paint,really fine technique.
 
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