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Old 08-13-2009, 08:01 AM   #46
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amazing work! cool details.
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Old 08-13-2009, 10:05 AM   #47
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Just stunning!
That dress looks fabulous.
 
Old 08-13-2009, 11:08 AM   #48
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May i say...

It is perfect.
 
Old 08-13-2009, 11:26 AM   #49
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Very nice - beautiful dress. Very pretty cloth shading, both on the dress and the drape.

Glad to see people are still taking cues from the 18th century
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Old 08-13-2009, 02:51 PM   #50
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If you want some crits, the facial expression is not on par with the rest of the image. I am missing some life in her face. It could be the color palette supporting this (looks like she is missing some blood) but that instantly caught my eyes.

Another thing is the background. Just pure black is...simple. I can imagine a more suitable but still not defocusing background. This is nit-picking though.

But that´s actually anything I like to crit. The modeling is superb, the pose is convincing and the dress is wonderful and the rendering, well, it´s maxwell, so very realistic. Overall a superb execution.
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Old 08-13-2009, 03:34 PM   #51
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thanks for comments and crits friends
tesekkürler

i am appreciated you like it .


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Originally Posted by Edenvisuals
Deniz,

How in the world did you plan out the folds? Where did you find reference for such an elaborate design? The modeling strikes

me the most, well done on the shading as well!



since there were lots of monsters and aliens around i was thinking about to make something different . after watching the

movie of "Marie Antoniette" i found my inspiration . the reference dress itself exists as an oil painting by Vigée Le Brun .

but i might suck at resemblance

http://www.ladyreading.net/marieant...big/marie18.jpg


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This is quite a piece of work. Congratulations!

I have only one comment. The line where the dress meets the torso looks tad too sharp for my eyes. Shoulder area looks good,

but the chest area looks like there's just a line, no wringkles etc.

Could be that we can't really see the details of the dress, since the photo is not enough big.
So it just makes it to look "flat"

Anyway that was just a 0.01% part of the whole piece! Fantastic work.



the torso is a corset so i hesitated to add folds there but it had lots of quilter on it . unfortunately they cant be seen

from this far well .


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Very impressive piece of work.
If I can bring your attention to one thing; in the 18th century women had their skin very white and some how really

transparent so one can see the veins.
That would kick-up the realism of your art piece.
Congratulation all the rest is so amazing.


oh yes . they really are . but that bust belongs to someone who is special for me



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If you want some crits, the facial expression is not on par with the rest of the image. I am missing some

life in her face. It could be the color palette supporting this (looks like she is missing some blood) but that instantly

caught my eyes.

Another thing is the background. Just pure black is...simple. I can imagine a more suitable but still not defocusing

background. This is nit-picking though.

But that´s actually anything I like to crit. The modeling is superb, the pose is convincing and the dress is wonderful and

the rendering, well, it´s maxwell, so very realistic. Overall a superb execution.



yes the face may need more work . unfortunately i had enough with sss shader and gave up at some point . it ate all my map

details and suffers lack of some parameters . i tried my best here . i hope we will see more correct calculations and

parameters with v2 that will save our time . so the background was dark red but amongst the color correction it turn to black

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Old 08-13-2009, 06:39 PM   #52
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The details on the cloth is just stunning . . Great work

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Old 08-13-2009, 09:30 PM   #53
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Stunning Work! Amazing!
 
Old 08-14-2009, 12:53 AM   #54
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I love this kind of subject .

Perhaps the character has too much SSS , but except that I like a lot this work
 
Old 08-14-2009, 02:42 AM   #55
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very flowery!great work!
 
Old 08-15-2009, 06:39 AM   #56
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Its an amazing work indeed, I believe many have given their useful critiques so I need not say more, do be proud of this work Deniz
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Old 08-16-2009, 04:28 PM   #57
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wow perfect work
 
Old 08-17-2009, 01:12 PM   #58
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I love the fabrics and the realism of the picture But isn't she a little too short?
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harika bi çalışma deniz eline saglık bende yapabilsem keşke senin kadar
 
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