StarCatcher mk. XIV, David Louis (3D)

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Old 07 July 2009   #31
Love the color scheme and the overall painterly feeling!
Great work.
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Old 07 July 2009   #32
Hi all ! thanks again for all your comments !

Silgrin4D : There was a vehicle at the beginning, but the story take place on a really small world, like a floating peace of rock. So we just kept the mk XIV and all the previous ones in a cimetary ( and the main character of course)
I prefer high contrast images but in this case, the low contrast setting improve the foggy atmosphere for the lost world I was looking for. (this may change depending of the mood of the sequence)

embryotic : well, I'll check this point carefuly ! You have to think about huge birds like albatross or big seagulls. We'll have a better feeling of the scale when we'll see our main character standing close to the telescope

Our world is like in "Le Petit Prince" with many small worlds, smalls rocks floating anywhere, but quite far from each other. In this idea, I have choosen long range birds to fly between each rocks.

JuGGerNauTT : be sure he won't be abandoned in our short film The mk XIV will be ready for his mission in the last sequence ! (We hope to release this on winter)

Last edited by Shadow2000 : 07 July 2009 at 03:15 PM.
 
Old 07 July 2009   #33
Very interesting composition, nice work!
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Old 07 July 2009   #34
yeah ! bien joué la belette ! la classe international
 
Old 07 July 2009   #35
I love the aesthetic and composition! Great job men!
 
Old 07 July 2009   #36
love the moood
 
Old 07 July 2009   #37
Great work

Shadow2000,

my only critique would be the cart looks a tad large. because of its simple shape its sort of hard to gauge its size. Maybe breaking up the silhouette a bit could help. really minor, but it caught my eye.

this is really great, I am really digging the painterly effect the image has.
looking forward to seeing this move.
 
Old 07 July 2009   #38
Very nice. Congrats for the feature on the main page.
 
Old 07 July 2009   #39
Love it. Great mood. I`m sure it has a story.
Congrats!!
 
Old 07 July 2009   #40
Originally Posted by Shadow2000: Hi all ! thanks again for all your comments !

JuGGerNauTT : be sure he won't be abandoned in our short film The mk XIV will be ready for his mission in the last sequence ! (We hope to release this on winter)


Good luck with the production guys, you've got a fan here, can't wait!
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Old 07 July 2009   #41
Good work...I love the rendering...
 
Old 07 July 2009   #42
WOw,love the machine there,would like to see the short
Nice work
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Old 07 July 2009   #43
Demilliac : iiik ! hellou mister Seb ca fait plaisir de te lire, comment vas tu ?

Rtist : I agree with you and adding some more details/objects will probably improve this feeling . Anyway, I'll have to redone this part for closer shots.
(I keep your comment in my "improvement list" for the finals shots. thanks)

Tiber : thanks man, that's so nice to find my starcatcher on the main page ! It really push me to work harder on this project !
 
Old 07 July 2009   #44
Cool

Nice work two thumbs up
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Old 07 July 2009   #45
Very pleasent atmosphere and a great design, nicely done David.
 
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