Forêt d'hiver, David Tiphaneaux (3D)

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  09 September 2006
Forêt d'hiver, David Tiphaneaux (3D)



Title: Forêt d'hiver
Name: David Tiphaneaux
Country: France
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

This is my first attempt to make a woman character.
I try to make my vision of a woman elf. I didn't want her to be really human.
My objectif was not realism.
I known that it need more work but I wan to start something new
I used 3dsmax for modeling / rendering and photoshop for texturing / compositing
Here a better rez image:
http://perso.orange.fr/david.tiphaneaux/Pics/Images/foretdhiver_HD.jpg

other test:

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  09 September 2006
Nice work. I like the lighting and facial expression.

Things to improve on;

-Skin texture. Lacking foundation detail (pore and overall color variation such as blushed areas,) blemishes too overpowering. Lips are very nice though.
-Ear model detail. For such a prominent part of her character, the ear should have more structural detail. The tip for example could be shaped more interestingly.

I really like the texturing work on her costume, nice hair/fur replication.
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  09 September 2006
I like this, in fatc I love it. You've done a great job, on the face and the clothes too. My only crit would be the three reflected squares in her eyes, you might want to change their shapes (make blurred circles or something). I think you're up fpr an award, congrats and good luck .
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  09 September 2006
agree, shes got such a lovely expression

I like the fur youve put on her coat too

Id like to give her a hug to warm her eh :P
 
  09 September 2006
Nice modeling and rendering.!.its nice if you put the uvs.
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  09 September 2006
Very good work!!!
Keep it!!
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  09 September 2006
I would like to thanks you for your comments.
thks EnginesOfCreation for pointing these problems, I will do better next time
For those who are interesting, here the wireframe:



Here the rest of the body that i have plan to use. But I havn't enough free time to continu it.



Thanks for taking you're time to posting
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  09 September 2006
miaaaaaouuuuu that is great works ! i love the expression;
le model complet dechire ! the wires are very clean.
 
  09 September 2006
Ah ouais, de la tuerie le reste du corps, tout est carrément bien géré
5* pour l'ensemble, ça mérite franchement que tu continues
 
  09 September 2006
Wooow.
very nice modeling.
Great job.i like your work.

Hamed katebi
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  09 September 2006
Really beautifull render! Congratulation

The shader of the skin is really great. There is just one thing: I don't like too much the top of the ear (too round for me)...

five stars for me
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  09 September 2006
Good job, the light is sweet and really magic like some cold days of winters….

(Et puis, bien d’autres choses plus faciles pour moi à exprimer en français telle que l’harmonie des bleus, le nacré de la peau…Sinon, très belle modélisation particulièrement visible avec la troisième image.)
 
  09 September 2006
*This is 'frontpage'!!

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very nice work!!
 
  09 September 2006
i rememder an early version[beter one imho] of this amaizing character .
it turned out to be great pic of art , 5* from me, very good job David
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