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Old 01 January 2006   #1
Bedroom, Moon Yk (3D)



Title: Bedroom
Name: Moon Yk
Country: China
Software: max+vray

It is a simple bedroom with bit royal look. I had used simple lights over here. If you people have any suggestion on my work please tell.
 
Old 01 January 2006   #2
The blinds look very unevenly spaced, good job other than that
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Old 01 January 2006   #3
yeah i agree with the blinds evenness. other than that good job. looks like an IKEA showroom.
 
Old 01 January 2006   #4
Thank the opinion of each friend, yes the ray is blind。
Friend, good luck.
 
Old 01 January 2006   #5
Thank the opinion of each friend, yes the ray is blind。
good luck.Friend.
 
Old 01 January 2006   #6
Thank the opinion of each friend, yes the ray is blind。
good luck.Friend.
 
Old 01 January 2006   #7
love the minimal style of the room. light is good. agree with the blinds. good work
 
Old 01 January 2006   #8
everything is great except for the window part, it looks like toon render at that part, maybe you can add any simple image or color for the window background, and to edit the blinds also but it shouldn't take you alot of time to do
or maybe just rotate the camera away from the window
great work
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Old 01 January 2006   #9
very good

Very good jobs...nice clean..congratulations
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Old 01 January 2006   #10
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Originally Posted by aliismail: everything is great except for the window part, it looks like toon render at that part, maybe you can add any simple image or color for the window background, and to edit the blinds also but it shouldn't take you alot of time to do
or maybe just rotate the camera away from the window
great work


You of the animadversion is very good, thanks.
 
Old 01 January 2006   #11
not bad, but you need area shadows, dude!!they are too defined now and its very striking. also the texture on the bed needs work.looks like you "over-bumped" it now. yeah, and as it's mentioned above, the blinds looks uneven.

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