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Old 01-18-2006, 03:53 AM   #1
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Bedroom, Moon Yk (3D)



Title: Bedroom
Name: Moon Yk
Country: China
Software: max+vray

It is a simple bedroom with bit royal look. I had used simple lights over here. If you people have any suggestion on my work please tell.
 
Old 01-18-2006, 08:27 AM   #2
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The blinds look very unevenly spaced, good job other than that
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yeah i agree with the blinds evenness. other than that good job. looks like an IKEA showroom.
 
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Thank the opinion of each friend, yes the ray is blind。
Friend, good luck.
 
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Thank the opinion of each friend, yes the ray is blind。
good luck.Friend.
 
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Thank the opinion of each friend, yes the ray is blind。
good luck.Friend.
 
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love the minimal style of the room. light is good. agree with the blinds. good work
 
Old 01-18-2006, 11:04 AM   #8
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everything is great except for the window part, it looks like toon render at that part, maybe you can add any simple image or color for the window background, and to edit the blinds also but it shouldn't take you alot of time to do
or maybe just rotate the camera away from the window
great work
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Old 01-18-2006, 12:29 PM   #9
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very good

Very good jobs...nice clean..congratulations
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Old 01-18-2006, 02:35 PM   #10
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everything is great except for the window part, it looks like toon render at that part, maybe you can add any simple image or color for the window background, and to edit the blinds also but it shouldn't take you alot of time to do
or maybe just rotate the camera away from the window
great work


You of the animadversion is very good, thanks.
 
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not bad, but you need area shadows, dude!!they are too defined now and its very striking. also the texture on the bed needs work.looks like you "over-bumped" it now. yeah, and as it's mentioned above, the blinds looks uneven.

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