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Old 05 May 2005   #1
Take Off, K Byrnes (3D)



Title: Take Off
Name: K Byrnes
Country: Australia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Hi again all
Here is what I've gone and done for the JETPACKJACK, Takeoff. Please forgive me if the lighting is off I'm still trying to get the hang of it.
But ill never say never.
well I hope you all see some improvement and like what I've done with him.
Cheers
3DArty
 
Old 05 May 2005   #2
great work mate, see you and
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Old 05 May 2005   #3
Thumbs up

HI 3Darty

Good work .. and good texture

But the model you have few polygons, it is for a video game the model ??

A greeting
 
Old 05 May 2005   #4
i like the overall scene,
the thing that bothers me is that the whole scene is moving (it has that effect) but the main character is not moving, i would make him kinda move. And the posture of the character seems wrong aswell, it doesn't feel like he's being proppelled by the jetpack, it's kinda like he's standing on the tip of his toes or leaning against a wall in some weird angle. I would have him look up and change the spine/legs/arms position a bit so that it feels like he is being pushed upwards at a high speed/force

your texturing is very nice though, but we already know you deliver quality textures !
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Old 05 May 2005   #5
Thx All yes it is a low poly 3496 is all, its a pose shot for a MOD comp the model could only
be a totol of 3500 polys.
and thx Simon.

Cheers

PS: please take the time to leave some feed back even a Good,ok,Bad,or Crap.
It all helps me in the long run to know whats what thx.

Last edited by 3DArty : 05 May 2005 at 07:13 PM.
 
Old 06 June 2005   #6
nice work. the only problem than I find is the dust and the smoke from the jetpac is like the guy is wearing columbia jetengine and he's going to mars.
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Old 06 June 2005   #7
Character appears bored with his current sittuation- kind of sleepy looking. Opening up his one good eye and giving him an expression with emotion will help to bring this piece alive. Head also looks a little small. BG is not exactly working for me with the pice- feels kind of separate. I do lie the body and blast.
 
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