|05-14-2005, 12:57 AM||#1|
Jostein Remi Arnoe
Join Date: Apr 2005
"predator Of The Deep", Jostein Remi Arnoe (3D)
|05-14-2005, 10:02 AM||#2|
the Flying oneportfolio
films & spaces
Join Date: Dec 2003
It looks quite interesting yet! The models of the ships look quite detailed, and the particles floating off look nice and give it some extra touch!
Some small points you could see as crit / points to maybe fix :
Maybe theres a bit too much 'grass' on the bottom... And maybe the mesh of the bottom is a bit too noisy... Maybe it would be interesting to put down some 'treasures' and so there... Or other sunken-ships?
Maybe you could also play a bit with the camera-angle, to make it to a more 'sensational' composition? And maybe to play with the colors... all is quite blue now, if you add some bright-yellowish tint around the 'explosion', you'll get an (even more ) amazing piece of art with a good color-feel!
Good luck with it & I hope you'll 'accept' my critique! ,
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|05-19-2005, 07:57 AM||#3|
Jamie Sebastian Kielland
Well i have to agree to what Dutchman says with the critique on this one . Maybe work slightly a bit more on composition and see about the grass a slight bit .
In all its good just a few things to make the work stand out a slight bit more
Good job dude
|05-19-2005, 07:57 AM||#4|
Lord of the posts
Join Date: Sep 2003
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