Garkhar- The Orc Warboss, Herbert Lowis (3D)

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  02 February 2005
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Cool orc, and cool wip pages everyone should check out.
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  02 February 2005
Zug Zug!
Hay nice job man I like th face.
 
  02 February 2005
Talking

wow really great work...my only crit is that in his face he looks old and grizzled instead of warrior fierce, maybe alter the eyes/eyebrow expression, but even still it is an amazing work!!!
 
  02 February 2005
great work, love it. keep them coming.
 
  02 February 2005
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Nice job.

I can't help but wonder about the Warcraft influence -- I did notice you said you were "trying to get away from warcraft orc" in your WIP thread, but to me it looks like you followed the design religiously (and did a great job of it), and the tattered flag on the wood cross certainly lends to that.

I agree with what MFTituS said about the skin; I think the armor is textured very well, but the skin doesn't quite match its quality. I'm wondering if some SSS for his skin would help (at least in places where it's less rough).
 
  02 February 2005
very nice orc you have there.

I think generally the anatomy and accesories are very well modelled, good job on that. The little details you put in, like the rings on the armor, and spikes here and there really help add life to him. I do think he looks very 'blizzard -like' (which isnt necessarily a bad thing), but a little more originality wouldn't hurt. You could also look at his skin tone a bit and give it some more variation, or try some different schemes other than the standard green. The other thing I would suggest is putting him in a stronger pose and giving him a weapon. His pose isn't doing anything to sell his personality or character at the moment....he needs an injection of energy. Just food for thought, overall this is a really strong model!

cheers,
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  02 February 2005
skin looks a tad bit too plastic...otherwise perfect! way to go!
 
  02 February 2005
finally this made FP, great stuff
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  02 February 2005
Looks great, a few more touches and it'll be closer to blizzard quality as people have mentioned...

My only problem with it is that there are no nipples. Being as humanoid as an orc is it just looks off to me not having them.. and it would fill up the chest space more going with the detail you already have.

overall great job
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  02 February 2005
Really love it man, hope to see more....

Keep it up.
 
  02 February 2005
Great work my friend congratulations
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  02 February 2005
what's with vfs and those wooden disks?

every single bloody person there uses them! it's ridiculous!
you can spot a vfs reel a mile off now...it's kinda funny....
 
  02 February 2005
Yes i know, what's up with that? he he
I have a few made of stone, if that helps, confracto.

The important thing is what is standing on it.

Cool model dude!!!

As blackarts said, you should add more color variation into the skin, reds, darkers greens and some blues for veins etc.
Also add an extra light with only specular on, that will help you show the hight lights on the metal without affecting the rest of the model.
good job!


Last edited by pablov : 02 February 2005 at 04:28 AM.
 
  02 February 2005
thanks for the critique and comment, guys.
yeah, I think my orc is pretty much typical orc in the end( green skin and stuff,) but I will try to make more original stuff in the future.
pablov: Thanks for reply, to tell you the truth, I actually looked at your reel for my reference( I think it's pretty obvious )

cheers guys,
HB
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