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Old 12-15-2004, 09:50 AM   #1
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A Discoverman, 3cm (3D)



Title: A Discoverman
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i'm a newworker so i hope you like my work
this is my dream ,
Modelling with Editable Poly 3dsMax6.Textures with 3Dsmax6 and Photoshop.Rendering By 3DsMax6.
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Old 12-15-2004, 03:37 PM   #2
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I'm not really liking the rain too much. It is kind of overpowering the scene, I can barely see the creature model. Also, you might want to cut down of the bloom on the ground and on the creature because IMHO it is taking away from the scene.
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Old 12-16-2004, 07:55 AM   #3
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HHHmmmm.... hay 3cm u r really doing nice job. u got a v.nice start. keep it up. Rain falling and rexturing is perfect. it really looks like a dream...
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Old 12-16-2004, 08:25 AM   #4
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i second that, reduce the rain and show us the real thing.
 
Old 12-16-2004, 08:33 AM   #5
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you're killing that image with glow and that noisy rain. what you can see from image looks kool alltough.
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Old 12-16-2004, 05:07 PM   #6
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I like the scene and the mood, however I think that there is just too much noise. If used subtly it can soften the image, but here it seems to just flatten it.

Also, the text is not too interesting to me. Perhaps just let the viewer get out of the image what they wish instead of trying to feed it to the viewer.
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