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Old 12-09-2004, 01:57 AM   #1
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Female Revolution (nudity), Lee Paul Sinclair (3D)



Title: Female Revolution (nudity)
Name: Lee Paul Sinclair
Country: United Kingdom
Software: BodyPaint, LightWave 3D, Photoshop, ZBrush

Its a subdivision model which is roughly rigged.

This is work in progress, I have been studying the female form for years. Trying to get the quality that many artists on this website achieve. Much more work to do. Will post the head and wires if possible, I am new to this forum and just getting used to the posting procedures : )
 
Old 12-09-2004, 04:55 AM   #2
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Lovely

This is just really lovely and shows understanding of the (realistic) human form.
 
Old 12-09-2004, 05:11 AM   #3
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Everything from the hips and up look like a man. I think the shoulders are too wide.
 
Old 12-09-2004, 05:21 AM   #4
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yes, she looks a little, like a man. but it give her a realistic look .

amazing modelisation and texturing !

please, more shots


 
Old 12-09-2004, 08:04 AM   #5
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As previously mentioned the shoulders seem a little wide. but I think the neck is probably what makes it look a little too manly, make it more slender.

Beautiful model tho, extrememly realistic.
 
Old 12-09-2004, 08:40 AM   #6
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It's nice and very realistic

Good job !
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Old 12-09-2004, 08:56 AM   #7
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a little too fat i think
 
Old 12-09-2004, 09:13 AM   #8
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First, excellent job and welcome to the forum. I think you modelled her great, the shoulders are broad, but I've known more than one who were built like that!
I think, on the whole, your texturing is excellent, just two gripes.

1: Looks like she just got a whipping, her butt is out of "synch" with the rest of her color scheme - looks like someone elses butt put on her!

2: Your hair piece (a hair accessory, i guess) is blending in with her head so that it is hard to see, and the blending mixed with the shadow is making it look like her head is dented! not what I look for in a woman! LOL

This is just what I think but, on the whole, you did a remarkable job. I have to agree witht the others who are asking for more shots, also a couple wires to see your technique.
Keep it up!
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Old 12-09-2004, 09:28 AM   #9
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WOW....

more views more views plis!

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Old 12-09-2004, 09:41 AM   #10
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The upper part of the body is way too stiff. The shoulders should be tilted more. And the left side of her abdomen should be curved.
 
Old 12-09-2004, 09:51 AM   #11
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Very realistic shader.
Great work.
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Old 12-09-2004, 10:15 AM   #12
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Wow! Nice work! Real nice shaders there!

Though, i do admit with others, she looks like a man above the hips.
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Old 12-09-2004, 12:22 PM   #13
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Great work.

I can't believe someone commented she was too fat! What a ridiculous thing to say.
The imperfections are what make her realistic.
 
Old 12-09-2004, 02:03 PM   #14
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great one,but the shoulders are too wide,she looks like a man. the uttermost/largest point of a woman are the hips ...and the legs looking a little bit....strong, but thats my own opinion..

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Old 12-09-2004, 02:27 PM   #15
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I was about to say the fat thing was a ridiculous comment, but IC12 already beat me to it!

I would say yes, reduce the width of the shoulders a little (not by a great amount, just a little), and also the neck. Oh... And tell me what shaders you're using!
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