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Old 09-02-2004, 06:19 PM   #1
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Robotox Walk Anim, Melak (Animation)



Title: Robotox Walk Anim
Name: Melak
Country: Hungary
Software: Lightwave3d

I managed to vivify the robotox, the first walk anim is ready. I would be grateful for having your critic.
Robotox_Anim /DivX 5.01 1.1Mb /:
http://roudes.kerekperec.hu/Robotox/Robotox_Walk.avi
 
Old 09-02-2004, 08:55 PM   #2
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Very good walk cycle I love the details

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Old 09-02-2004, 09:06 PM   #3
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Looks pretty good. His right leg-covering snaps when he plants it.
He definitely looks heavy enough and all the movement is good. I think he might fall over backward in his current attitude though. I'd bend him forward at the hips. If you can, twist him him at the waist and the whole body would look a lot less stiff. Maybe add some more moving parts. The various tubes and chains hanging off him should jiggle when he plants each foot, that detail would really help sell this.
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Old 09-03-2004, 12:05 AM   #4
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i agree with HenningK about the jiggeling parts of it. like a rope would wing left and right not stiff.

Also a nice glow inside were the eye is would be nice too,

if you want to add more to the surface, how about a Number or Hint of Color bans

Like i said whe i seen this post well you were making this, i enjoy looking at the tiny parts
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Old 09-03-2004, 01:21 AM   #5
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That is what I would called THE RoBBoT. Good work man. LW rocks!

keep it that way

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Old 09-03-2004, 01:28 AM   #6
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Got some fine details there. I like it.
He looks kinda intimidating in the walking cycle.
 
Old 09-03-2004, 08:28 AM   #7
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good.

I think you have to add more secondary animations, over the detail objects.
Now it seems to be a rigid piece of metal..

anyway, good work man
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Old 09-04-2004, 12:18 PM   #8
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Great!!! Well done!
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Old 09-06-2004, 07:22 AM   #9
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good work
keep it up
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