Character (jerboa In Arabian Heat), Khalid Abdulla Al-muharraqi (3D)

Title: Character (jerboa In Arabian Heat)
Name: Khalid Abdulla Al-muharraqi
Country: Bahrain
Software:

Hi all,
This is a charictor that I have created a few month back , it took me 2 weeks to put together , I't's an imaginary jerboa from my sketches, I was intresed to see how the hair & fir look on my final model, Please give me any comments that you have about this render.

fur looks the best in the first pic imo. but the tail looks like hay a bit. tail looks best in secnd pic. love to see this character scurrying around. good stuff!

Awesome; I want one.

Er, do they bite?

Great work on the fur, and the eyes, and the nose, and the model, and...everything. I'm not sure about the camera angles (and there isn't much camera variety from shot to shot), but that's ok too.

My only real crit, though, is that you can see the sections in its tail; some more smoothing would help there (I'm assuming you don't need to limit the polygon count...).

I don't know what it is, but I LIKE IT! Nice creature, nice environment.

If I have to critique anything, it would be the pose on the top image, only because the eyes from a more profile position look more readable.

Nice job man! Now lets see him move!

I like it! I'll have to agree though, tail is a tiny bit blocky. But great work otherwise!

hahaha...great work man...amazing cartoony "jarboo3"..amazing i love the eyes !
keep up the good work

oh wow,this is totally amazing man!!! ,i want one too

Really a super character. I guess if I had to critique something, it would be that the tail looks a little polygonal close to the body. Also, I'd like the thicker hairs to be more smoothly curved. Other than those two small (very small) things, looks awesome.

Great work man!! Did u used sasquatch right?

The only thing I would suggest is to make the fibers look a little bit softer... anyway exlendid job!

I love it ... very charismatic.

Funny creature, nice fur

I see all pictures now

I think the last one is the best

It's really a nice and cute character. Good design and good 3D work in general.
We want to see more
Good luck.

Hi all,
Thanks for the great comments , All comments were Great and that will always better my attention to details in the future.

This is the sketch that I had for a while, I have tried to get as close as I could to my idea. I'm amazed sometimes on how much fun it gets to be to try to make your sketches in 3-D, It's almost like software Clay-!!




When I first created the original model,
I didn't like how it sits, So I made it standing with longer legs,
I wanted it to look more human.



I will try to post a test render on this guy walking a few seconds, To just see how he looks.

gr8 work, looks charismatic and very cute, even his skinny version looks good but fure adds a lot .