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Old 07-31-2004, 08:15 AM   #1
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Still - Avalokiteshvara, Jared Lim (3D)



Title: Still - Avalokiteshvara

Name: Jared Lim
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She listens to the woes and cries of the world with great compassion. Also known as Goddess of Mercy, Goddess of Compassion or Kwan Yin.

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Old 07-31-2004, 10:35 AM   #2
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this is a pretty good piece. i like it all except for the shoulders and eyes.

the shoulders look kind of lumpy and large, kind of formless.

the eyes look too far up on her head.
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Old 07-31-2004, 11:17 AM   #3
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very nice work...

i like it a lot....congratulations
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Old 07-31-2004, 12:39 PM   #4
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I love it ^_^

Crits...the face...it seems a bit manly. The shoulders seems a bit straight.

8/10
 
Old 07-31-2004, 12:50 PM   #5
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Nice work!

I can really feel the peace flowing from her. aaahhh... {stretches back}

Anywhoo, I like the garment especially the stencil ends.



I will have to agree with wedge, the shoulders seem like there is no muscle under them and the eyes seem like the can be rotated to a more horizontal position. I also think the neck might be a little to long. If you like the elongated neck it is cool with me. The last thing we need is more Barbies.

The hand holding the vase seems to lack definition, Its kind of too cartoonie. A slight sense of knuckle might make it believable. I feel sorry for the little plant in the vase, it might need some water maybe

I really like the colors used, and how her skin changes tones as the background does too, nice touch!
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Old 07-31-2004, 03:00 PM   #6
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nice, very beautiful
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Old 07-31-2004, 03:38 PM   #7
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i like it!i love those garments floating on air....
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Old 07-31-2004, 03:54 PM   #8
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cool

I like the garment especially
 
Old 07-31-2004, 08:20 PM   #9
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Post Great Modeling. but....

Great modelling + excellent design but her face is not beautiful, Try to work on her face.
Keep it up.




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Old 08-01-2004, 08:56 AM   #10
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Wow, i love the colors. Good job
 
Old 08-01-2004, 03:15 PM   #11
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Great design and cool modeling, but I have to agree with Musoka's comment!
She is looking a bit manly! Maybe you have to work a bit more on her face and upper body!

Cool work though!
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Old 08-02-2004, 07:07 AM   #12
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Thanks for the appreciation, feedback and critiques. Here is the alternative version. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder......
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Old 08-02-2004, 06:09 PM   #13
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Her eyes are less slanty... thats good. I think you need shadows on her. It looks flat... the whole body, but especially the face. It looks like the light is coming from right behind camera, like a flash photo, which is always unflattering. She needs shadow on her neck and under her nose and eyebrows. then after that maybe her smile should be less vacuous.
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Old 08-06-2004, 08:06 AM   #14
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very nice model, but doesn't looks realistic to me. but very good job anyway.
 
Old 08-06-2004, 08:46 AM   #15
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her eyes look alot better in the 2nd picture u posted

her right wrist seems too flat, like it's made of rubber... probably a skinning issue

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