Still - Avalokiteshvara, Jared Lim (3D)

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  07 July 2004
Still - Avalokiteshvara, Jared Lim (3D)

Title: Still - Avalokiteshvara

Name: Jared Lim
Country: Singapore
Software: Lightwave 8

She listens to the woes and cries of the world with great compassion. Also known as Goddess of Mercy, Goddess of Compassion or Kwan Yin.

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  07 July 2004
this is a pretty good piece. i like it all except for the shoulders and eyes.

the shoulders look kind of lumpy and large, kind of formless.

the eyes look too far up on her head.

will geddes
graphic design | advertising
  07 July 2004
very nice work...

i like it a lot....congratulations
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  07 July 2004
I love it ^_^

Crits...the seems a bit manly. The shoulders seems a bit straight.

  07 July 2004
Nice work!

I can really feel the peace flowing from her. aaahhh... {stretches back}

Anywhoo, I like the garment especially the stencil ends.

I will have to agree with wedge, the shoulders seem like there is no muscle under them and the eyes seem like the can be rotated to a more horizontal position. I also think the neck might be a little to long. If you like the elongated neck it is cool with me. The last thing we need is more Barbies.

The hand holding the vase seems to lack definition, Its kind of too cartoonie. A slight sense of knuckle might make it believable. I feel sorry for the little plant in the vase, it might need some water maybe

I really like the colors used, and how her skin changes tones as the background does too, nice touch!
Live your dreams or someone else will....

Last edited by Mata Tango : 07 July 2004 at 01:07 PM.
  07 July 2004
nice, very beautiful
Daniel Cavalcante
characeter animator
  07 July 2004
i like it!i love those garments floating on air....
msn addres :
  07 July 2004

I like the garment especially
  07 July 2004
Post Great Modeling. but....

Great modelling + excellent design but her face is not beautiful, Try to work on her face.
Keep it up.

Best Regards
Best Regards
ZMC Studio
  08 August 2004
Wow, i love the colors. Good job
  08 August 2004
Great design and cool modeling, but I have to agree with Musoka's comment!
She is looking a bit manly! Maybe you have to work a bit more on her face and upper body!

Cool work though!
Reality is overrated...
  08 August 2004
Thanks for the appreciation, feedback and critiques. Here is the alternative version. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder......

Last edited by dzogchen : 02 February 2005 at 06:35 PM.
  08 August 2004
Her eyes are less slanty... thats good. I think you need shadows on her. It looks flat... the whole body, but especially the face. It looks like the light is coming from right behind camera, like a flash photo, which is always unflattering. She needs shadow on her neck and under her nose and eyebrows. then after that maybe her smile should be less vacuous.
  08 August 2004
very nice model, but doesn't looks realistic to me. but very good job anyway.
  08 August 2004
her eyes look alot better in the 2nd picture u posted

her right wrist seems too flat, like it's made of rubber... probably a skinning issue

awesome stuff
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