|07 July 2009||#21|
Lord of the postsportfolio
A few constructive crits:
the grapes look a little flat when compared to the photo.Increasing the contrast and saturation would help.
Adding SSS to the straw threading of that little cap/coaster thing at the bottom left would help make it glow like the in the photo.Right now the threading is lacking translucency.
The pattern of the coaster thing needs to be closer to the photo.Right now there's too much white. Also, the reflection is too bright when compared to the photo-Maybe adding a light bounce card in front would help darken it up.
the small glass next to the wine glass is off. the base is green and should be more yellow. Also, the blue glass of the base doesn't blend with the wine.The refraction seems a bit off as a result.
but those are just nitpicks. Great stuff!
EDIT: I just noticed the coaster thing is actually a makeup powder thing?If that's the case then the grill threading is probably solid gold and not a threading of sort. If it is gold then you have cheap gold.Gold value is valued by karats with the higher karat providing the more saturated yellow(gold color). it's a bit desaturated in the render. Adding a gold metallic finish would help I think. OK, I"ll shut up now :0
Last edited by ha-dou-ken : 07 July 2009 at 09:10 PM.
|07 July 2009||#22|
tapping his potentialportfolio
Join Date: Feb 2004
beautiful render and overall visual.
-Life is a balancing, make it work, give each significance equal share, keep it in perspective/moderation
|07 July 2009||#25|
Modeler & Digital Sculptor
San Francisco, USA
Join Date: Jul 2006
excellent render! Love that SSS.
|07 July 2009||#26|
Join Date: Jan 2005
hi mahesh....gr8 job ..but u missed those beautiful suttle highlights on the grapes which make them feel like rubber i ur 3d render..jst closely exmine the grapes in ur photshot...but gr8 wrk anyways.
|07 July 2009||#27|
Auckland, New Zealand
Join Date: Jun 2007
leigh Thanks a lot for posting my work on the front page cgsociety.
This project was part of my studies in Media Design school ( Auckland,NZ)
I'm doing the graduate diploma of advanced 3d productions there.
Have look at my friend's works..
My blog: http://am3dartist.blogspot.com
Once again thanks for your comments
Last edited by mahe4art : 07 July 2009 at 06:58 AM.
|07 July 2009||#30|
Lord of the posts
Wuah nice one, really like it
some crits if you don't mind
The render looks a bit soft imo. Look at the blooming of the light, the intensity is ok, but it's spread out too much, in the photo it's more concentrated if you look at the window frame for example, most of the light is probably from the reflection, not because of blooming like in the render. You can also see it inbetween the basket holes, it's really intense, but it's concentrated it doesn't spread out that much. This gives more contrast and less washyness.
Most other things were already mentioned i guess.
Still, very good
|Thread Closed share thread|