Almost Vacation, Luckske (3D)

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  09 September 2004
Almost Vacation, Luckske (3D)

Title: Almost Vacation
Name: Luckske
Country: Belgium
Software: CINEMA 4D

A scene i made for the Dutch Cinema4D contest.
I used Maxon Cinema4D and Photoshop to add some birds.
I spend on this scene +- 4 weeks in sparetime.

  09 September 2004
man I cant belive I am the first one to comment on this! this is very very good how did you set up your lighting? can we get a wire? One crit the walls are to clean to uniform.
  09 September 2004

WOW! nice work!

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  09 September 2004
It's very nice. No people because the sun has left the pool?

The pool would look much more inviting with some sun though...

  09 September 2004
This is a nice piece . . . it reminds me somewhat, in lighting and proportion, of sets Pixar has done. Maybe you could add some repaired patches to the stucco walls, and knock a few roof tiles slightly out of alignment to give it a touch more realism.

Still, good work.
Brian "balistic" Prince
"tessellaters gonna tessellate"
digital art / hi-tech soul music
  09 September 2004
tnx for the comments , i'm not used to model under pressure and in this case i had too
i won the first price with my first competition (still can't believe it) now i have a officiale c4d licence .
i know this scene its not perfect and could use a lot of perfectionism , but the time i made it (+- 3 month's ago) i only had 512 mb ram and an older videocard.
maybe i wil update it when i have some time left , i had a lot comment's on that walls and know it could use some cracks in the walls so it would look a little bit more realistic.
i also would add some people in the scene but 4 weeks in sparetime (+- 2 hours a day) is to short .
i also made a BBQ but without people it would be stupid to add in the scene .

Greetz, Luckske
  09 September 2004
here's the wire , it is a little mess but if you have a lot of objects its normal i think


Greetz, Luckske
  09 September 2004
oops , i posted double topic

Last edited by luckske : 09 September 2004 at 11:30 PM.
  09 September 2004
small crit but vital, your plants need variance.
  09 September 2004
I like lighting and water expression. good job!
sorry for my bad English. ush
  09 September 2004
Originally Posted by ush: I like lighting and water expression. good job!

as long we can understand it... so far i do
  09 September 2004

cool scene...good light!
i like to see render with different light/sun source
one crit: the doors and windows seems out of the wall
  01 January 2006
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