Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Touko Maksimainen

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Old 06 June 2004   #61
Post Effects and Compositing: Some more postproduction

C&C please.
I am running late.

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Old 06 June 2004   #62
I really like your last post effects.
Nicely done!
And as it emits so much light maybe you could
make some rocks or that long sea grass wich
would be affected by that light - will give it some
space and depth. Just a thouth...
Old 06 June 2004   #63
WoW, excellent... no crits. It really looks like a jelly fish. I can;t imagine what else needs to be done. You could make the machine components stand out a little more, but that would mean reducing the visibility of the jelly parts. I think you have a nice balance already.

Nice one.
Old 06 June 2004   #64
Thank you for these comments guys.

People have been telling me that I should put something on the background. The reason why I wont do that is because this thing is so fast that it has to travel far away from any obstacles. It needs open water to maneuver properly.
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Old 06 June 2004   #65
Final Image: composition completed

I'm pretty satisfied with this. This was by far the biggest project I've handled so far.
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Old 06 June 2004   #66
Looks great, though I can see what people mean about putting it in a setting. Perhaps you could give the water some substance?, small particles, bubbles or volumetric light ? Either way looks great!
Old 06 June 2004   #67
Well done, I think you have achieved a lot with this shot. Composition, effects and shading are all very good. I'd love to see a bigger render though...

Old 06 June 2004   #68
Final Image: jellyfish three-pack

Final .tiff uploaded. All done. Phew.
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Old 06 June 2004   #69
Congrats for finishing!!! Now you can relax
Old 06 June 2004   #70
Hi Touko,

I have to say your final is really interesting and well designed!
Congrats to you!
Old 07 July 2004   #71
Thanks guys.

These kind of challenges are extremely good for learning. I hope the next challenge will be an work-in-progress challenge. Though I think the theme will be hard to top up.
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Old 07 July 2004   #72
Good Job , Dude !
Old 01 January 2006   #73
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