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Old 04-11-2004, 02:04 AM   #16
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The funborns coming to 3D soon.Looking forward to this ADR................bring them on.Fun and interesting all in one...........
 
Old 04-11-2004, 02:59 AM   #17
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Modeling: Model Update _Archivald Body



Hello guys, this my first update about modeling , this is the Archivalds body, right now im working on improved the shape of the arms and the hands then i will start to model the head . Hope you like it.

I would like to know you opinion about it.

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Old 04-11-2004, 10:47 AM   #18
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hola, voy a escribir en ingles para que otros puedan leer:

ok, nice start on the shape, wich modeling technique r u using?,
just a few comments about the model, i think the arms looks a bit squarish yet but maybe this looks like so bcos of the lights, i find well done your model til now, dont forget the folds on the pants man!, good start , keep pushigs those vertices, il stay tuned to see your updates, keep on the good work man
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Old 04-12-2004, 12:03 PM   #19
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Hey ADR, La idea me parece buenísima y bastante interesante. El modelo esta impecable. Me gustaría saber si te planteas hacer sólo el caracter o tambien diseñarle un entorno? porque algo así como un circo o freaksow de humanos mecanizados me parecería alucinante!!!
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Old 04-12-2004, 03:38 PM   #20
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im using Polys for the project, and hope to finish the head today in the night , ill put more details in the arm to get a smooth shape there.

VerynastyVerynasty yes im thiniking on make an eviroment soon. I will focus in the characters and then i will start to think about the eviroment.

Thanks for the coments
 
Old 04-12-2004, 07:19 PM   #21
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Great job; the idea is amazing!

About the model, something's strange with the pants... In the legs, the proportions in Z are bigger than proportions in X (pa que me entiendas; se ve más largo que ancho)
Sigue adelante!
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Puede ser la cámara como fué rendeada. Tal vez si muestras la posición canónica se aprecie mejor
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Old 04-13-2004, 05:36 AM   #23
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Modeling: Archivalds Head



Thanks for the comments and the crits guys , this is the face of Archivald and a new shot to see the proportions of the body.

Any comments and crits are welcome

 
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And we have flesh...............Good to see.The Funborns are here.........

If I could make a suggestion adr..............


I would elongate the upper torso a touch.The chest area should be a little longer in the "Y" direction,just a touch.

I would probably add one more fat roll below the two along the rib cage.................

I think the arms need more length,and the hands need more size overall.....................

These are small things,and most probably taste issues on my part,just trying to give you another set of eys here adr.......

All in all it's looking good,and the concept theme has lots of potential in all aspects.........OK get back to work,I'll check back up on you later.Nice WIP thus far.Keep at it hard........
 
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Hi Adr: as a complement with the virtuoso's advice, i think that the line between the neck and chest is so marked, makes look the head totally apart from the body, is just matter of moving those vertices out a bit to lose contrast in that line, but this could be just a personal taste matter so maybe is not necesary to do this, this model is going good, the character looks really funny, nice job man!
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Good job ADR. Try to smoth a little the chest. The head looks great I'ts very funny
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Old 04-13-2004, 02:23 PM   #27
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Perdona que insista, Creo que debería ser redonda
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Old 04-13-2004, 04:57 PM   #28
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Virtuoso , Rattlesnake thks for your kinds words guys, ill work in your suggestions today and tweak the body the the arms and the head.

Verynasty thanks man for your opinions, ill work later in the chest to improve it

Mosconariz didnt forgot your point about the legs man , ill work in that too

Thanks guys
 
Old 04-14-2004, 02:24 AM   #29
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Cool clown, and my mum thinks I`m one..... yours confims what I`ve suspected all along, I`m not really.
Your model`s looking real cool.
 
Old 04-14-2004, 10:37 PM   #30
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This is a different point on the challenge subject that i haven't seen so far...nice thought adr !!!...i don't know if it helps but if u could find BINGO the small movie that was with Maya 1 made ..u will find a lot of good color reference..(and some modeling ideas ) to give your subject more that circus mood.

If u don't know where to find it ..tell me to find a link for u !!!

.....now get to work

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