|10-11-2003, 04:16 AM||#17|
on top of the world
Elvar Bjarki Böğvarsson
Join Date: Feb 2002
wow amazing and I have a new background thanks to you
how about a wireframe and maybe anon textured render? :=)
My current projects on cgtalk:
My recently finished short, and a poster for it, hurray
My first real attempt at texturing
Work in Progress:
My office bloke
|10-11-2003, 05:10 AM||#24|
Lead Technical Artist
Got fanboy replies much?
First off, your modeling is very nice. I'd advice some work on te textures. They come of a bit on the muddy side, and really scream "CG". Perhaps you could reduce the specularity(or add some bump mapping or a spec map to further breakup the spec).
Personally, I don't care much for the subject matter, but it is rather nicely rendered overall. Lighting is pretty good, though a bit flat.
Again, my overall impression is simply that the textures/shaders/materials are pulling the piece down a bit, and I think the piece deserves a bit more tweaking.
Now with more ninjas!
|10-11-2003, 05:31 AM||#25|
Wing Chun Veteran
Join Date: Dec 2002
i agree with the lighting, that dark blue light is a bit distracting on her. about the texture, i think that suit the stylised look on the character. i saw a book on digital idols (mostly japanese) and they all have similar sort of look texture wise... maybe that's the popular style around that region?
|10-11-2003, 05:33 AM||#26|
long live Darrell
Join Date: Jan 2003
It's hard to be objective, or criticize something I just turned into my desktop picture.
One of the things that I like the most is the females body proportions. Nothing is overdone, or underemphasized. Like huge breasts with a tiny waist, and a bubble butt that remains small, but has hips you could hang curtains on.
Her shape is very realistic. Unusual for most female pieces by males in a CG forum. I applaud.
And I love it. really nice work
The only thing I see that is bothersome is the nipples. They are either colorless, unrealisticly small, or she was in fact born without areola.
08/20/1966 - 12/8/2004
I got CULT status baby!
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