Jennifer, Rami Shtainer (3D)

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  05 May 2006
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Really nice. Just a couple of comments. I think if you fix these, you won't be able to tell that it is a render at all.

The ears are a bit too red. It looks like she had a gallon of blood rushing to her head, but her head doesn't get affected. Only her ears.

Her hairline on top of her head needs some accentuation. Maybe move it forward from her head a little so you get a soft shadow that defines the hairline on her forehead.

Her top is supposed to be turtle neck am I right? Remove the shinniness. That material is not supposed to be so uniformly shiny. The fabric does lend itself to specular highlights, but break it up into hairline sort of effect.
  05 May 2006
kicks butt!

Great Great stuff!!!
  05 May 2006
congratulation! the top half of the image is nothing to say.below of the mouth is a little strange.
  05 May 2006
good work, i just think that the ear and cheek area seems quite weird. makes her look a bit strange.
  05 May 2006
Very good work. She looks like alive :-) Only one thing. In the contour of the ear (in the zone of light) I seems to see a facetade zone. Like if this zone has low poly. Congratulations
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  05 May 2006
Looks really good mate. Really good.
Only thing that sticks out about CG hair is how, non messy it is. Always looks like it's JUST been straightened and brushed. A few frizzy stray hairs always helps sell the effect, IMO.
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  05 May 2006
I like.:)

Great job! I like. Though, I don't know who she is. Please someone fill me in. SOme of you point out that she is easily who is she? Jennifer..what's her last name? Can ya show us some wires too. and a breakdown of your shader network too, please?
  05 May 2006
looks great!, for some reason the eye's seem to be a bit smaller, but im unsure though, otherwise its awsome!

  05 May 2006
issit elizabeth hurly ?

very gorgeous image.... So real to be true!

congrat on ur great image.
  05 May 2006

Oh WOW!! That is supurb.

Beautiful likeness, not just that but amaisingly done.

5/5 from me

  05 May 2006
wow, dude!!

nice render, she is hot!

5 ***** for u
  05 May 2006
that's pretty impressive! Right on time to feel nostalgic too 5 stars!

  05 May 2006
this looks really great! i would like to see a wireframe to know more about the details youve modelled! could you show up some textures? the street looks really cool to me!
  05 May 2006
Off course it's all in the eyes. These are very good eyes!
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  05 May 2006
IMPRESSIVE work rami !!!
you really managed to captured the right mood....excellent job.
5 stars from me too !

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