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Old 11-25-2002, 03:47 AM   #1
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Vehicle - Yacht updated



Thanks for all the remarks regarding the lighting issues of the image I posted. Hope this one is better!

Please let me know what you think. The first animation is done!
 
Old 11-25-2002, 05:15 AM   #2
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uhmmm... yikes!

that isn't real?

looks awesome!
 
Old 11-25-2002, 07:30 AM   #3
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oh man thats nice!
 
Old 11-25-2002, 07:51 AM   #4
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i didnt see any previous version of this but i think its all still a bit too bright nearly making the whole side of the yacht one white plane.. turn it down a little bit maybe...

other than that very nice.. good job on the waves and the wake..
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the land mass in the upper left somewhat detracts from the composition. try adding some trees or rocks. otherwise it looks great!
 
Old 11-26-2002, 01:09 AM   #6
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Thanks guy's for the nice responds!

I changed the lighting a little so that the hull looks less "overlit".

Let me know if this is any better...

John
 
Old 11-26-2002, 01:17 AM   #7
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wow!...I would love to see wireframes for this...great work!
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Old 11-26-2002, 02:01 AM   #8
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WOW! Looks almost completely real! I will put you in my will.You will get the disposable silverware thats left in the drawer when I die.
 
Old 11-26-2002, 02:25 AM   #9
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Thanks Sumpm1! I gladly take all your silverware...

Dear William,
Attached a wireframe of the yacht. The lower hull poly's are based on what you see is what you get since I "froze" that part of the yacht in order to make the window-booleans work (you as LW user know what I mean...). The rest is level 3 of sub-D's.

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Old 11-26-2002, 02:30 AM   #10
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This one shows a zoomed-in version with the used Weight-maps.

I frequently use Weight-maps to decrease poly count.

John
 
Old 11-26-2002, 02:31 AM   #11
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something about the water or overall composition that keeps making me think it's a remote controled boat. need something to compare it to get a sense of scale possibly. this is probably just me. possibly adding reflections to the boat? I wish i could comment further, but i'm not that skilled with scale right now.
 
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Great job....very professional model you have there....you should send in one of the images to the LW gallery....
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Old 11-26-2002, 03:05 AM   #13
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neee... I keep having to convince myself taht this isn't a photo! Great job! it all looks so real!
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Old 11-26-2002, 03:38 AM   #14
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Thanks again!

I agree with that something should be added to show the size of the yacht. What about a booye (how do you spell that device that floots on the water?)?
 
Old 11-26-2002, 05:06 AM   #15
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great work! The first image I thought was a photo, then I saw the second one. IMHO the first one looks real. and u can tell the second one is CG. Nice use of weightmaps
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