Contemporary Living Room, Amilton Diesel / Compumanager (3D)

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  09 September 2004

I agree its a nice render, helped by glass and chrome but I look

beyond that and try to say what I believe is not quite right with
the image to help the artist.

- I can see a full reflection of the wall table in the marble floor
but not the plant next to it nor its shadow on the wall.

- The Window frames have no thickness so are not structurally sound.
This high up I expect them a lot thicker, and the glass in them. Thats
why the city looks like a lightbox with an over-exposed graphic.

Only one or two little things I might change are -

- cushions on the sofa ; makes it more homely not a showroom
- something in the fireplace as it looks too bare
- and Ive never seen so accurately laid out chairs around a table ; move em slightly
- and remove the hard shadow of the glass shelf above the tv - lightsource ?
Good work. I would like to see a night time version.
  09 September 2004
Great Work! It looks photoreal!

The only thing that looks off to me is the reflection on the table's legs on the far wall under the mirror, they seem to be reflecting something that isn't there...

Other than that, great job!
  09 September 2004
how come that every time I visit any thread in here, I can't see the picture ?
what happen to me ? is there something wrong ?
  09 September 2004

I love the rendering and the great style you put in it.. great art.. laterz...
  09 September 2004
Very pretty! It's really static tough. I mean chairs are perfectly aligned etc. Id'like to see a render where you can tell people have lived in the room. Very good job still!
Jack had a groove. And from this groove came the groove of all grooves. And while one day viciously throwing down on his box, Jack boldy declared, "Let there be HOUSE!"
  09 September 2004
Ironing Board

Not a complaint, but every time I see the table under the large mirror I think Ironing Board. It is a great illustration.

Speaking of mirrors, you must like them as there might be too many for my liking.

I love this place!
  09 September 2004
Thumbs up Great

Absolutely Stunning!
Don't even think about quitting!
  10 October 2004
beutiful..the lighting is awsome..great render
  10 October 2004
great job,
this is commercial?
Pablos Gola
  10 October 2004
Thank you all so much again. I agree with some mistakes you find in the image, like the flat background and the empty fire place. Yes, the image is comercial, made for a high standard undertaking. I wish to do it better if I had a longer deadline.
For the Love of Art and the Making
  10 October 2004
wish I have a house like this.....cooly cooly
  10 October 2004
Very nice!
  10 October 2004
great render! very realistic!
  10 October 2004
o myˇ

1 thing
is so reflective de cristal of the televison
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  10 October 2004
Thumbs up Wow.......

Congrag......! Thats realistic work......
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