Fluid Inspiration, Akira Hanzo (3D)

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Old 09 September 2004   #16
Very nice render. The texturing looks kind of odd around the mouth, but other than that this could pass as a photo.
I'd say this is one of my new favorite compositions that I've seen here, at least.
Old 09 September 2004   #17
pore . lentigo . derma's texture
they look so clear
good job
Old 09 September 2004   #18
composition is very much out of balance, the diametral oposition if the water breaking is not very much in relation with the woman's face.

the modelling is good.
morally intact in 3d space
and as homer once said: DOH!
Old 09 September 2004   #19
great work, very realitic
Daniel Cavalcante
characeter animator
Old 09 September 2004   #20
Thank you...

I know the accident with the pores... but I am just a begginer! I will be more carefull with texture... Thanks for all messages. It was a pleasure!

I'll be back soon!
Old 09 September 2004   #21
This is awesome work! The textures and especially the skin shader are phenomenal. The hair and eyebrows are very well done also. I agree that the pores on the cheeks are a tad bit too much and that the eyes are too "glassy" looking. What does this image look like in color?
Old 09 September 2004   #22
I think this work deserver some attentions. here's my 2 cent.

The part that given away is the split end of the hair. Now it look very obvious that it's build from plane. This could be problems with the transparency map. But anyway, I believe u can do better job than that.

The highlight in the eye is too hard (it's scary u know?), u could try to make it a little smaller and softer (but not too soft). Currently the eye's shader looks more like highly reflective glass than watery translucean eye. The value of the spec on eye could be a little lower too.
I don't really mind the pores. looks fine for me.

should be nicer if u add a little falloff rim light from both sides of jaw and neck.

Composition wise, it's really off balanced. but it still undenyably a very nice image.

Someone make it front page!
Old 09 September 2004   #23

quality nice , great work
Old 09 September 2004   #24
nice work her eyes r realy nice
Old 09 September 2004   #25
Real nice!

Maybe try to make the girl blurred as if she was in the background. This enhances the picture and give it more depth.
"The beauty is in the eye of the beholder" // Marty Feldman
Old 09 September 2004   #26
Very impressive

Hello friend Akira

Really good ! Congratulations !
Luciano Neves

Old 09 September 2004   #27
your stuff is really good... the liquid has been treated really well... hope to see more of your work soon...
Old 09 September 2004   #28
great work looks real
Old 09 September 2004   #29
Thumbs up

Beautiful work... The eyes keep you staring. I like the composition also. Keep it up!
Old 09 September 2004   #30

M-ai rupt efectiv!
Superba lucrarea!
Nu-ti mai zic chestia cu porii ca deja cred ca te-ai plictisit dar tre'sa-ti zic ca de-abia astept lucrarea urmatoare!

si stii ce ma bucura?incet,incet,tot mai multi romani iau CGtalk Award-ul!!!

Bravo inca o data!!!
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