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Old 07-23-2004, 01:05 AM   #31
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veryy good work, how much render time?
 
Old 07-23-2004, 06:16 AM   #32
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Nice, nice render... I really like the lighting, a bit blown out, that's what makes it so real, like you would really see it on a bright morning walking in from the outside. Details are outstanding.
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Old 07-23-2004, 07:41 AM   #33
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veryy good work, how much render time?
render 3 hour 45 min
2 light source- Targe directional light (basic)
- Vraylight plane(auxiliary) established in a window an aperture
 
Old 07-23-2004, 07:56 AM   #34
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Wow! Amazing work. Well done.
I think maybe the reflection in the tv could possibly be toned down a bit but other than that it looks fantastic! Only wish i could do something like that.
 
Old 07-23-2004, 09:08 AM   #35
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Thumbs up Sunny Sunny

i wish i was on that room and lay down on that nice shiny sun.
good job .
 
Old 07-23-2004, 11:12 PM   #36
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Why do people expect the world to be completely old and dirty?

Dirty-ing up objects don't make them more realistic.

Is it just to put your opinions forward? I don't know, I don't think any of the suggestions would make it 'better', just more status quo.

This is a fantastic piece and people should enjoy the contrasts in the image.

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Old 07-24-2004, 01:09 AM   #37
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this is very very good...only prob is that the bed's blanket is too blue for the rest of the image...nice enviro though
 
Old 08-04-2004, 08:16 AM   #38
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Cool I can feel the sun...

Thanks Grig,

Extremely beautiful render. Lighting looks incredible. Well, actually that means CREDIBLE, it's just incredibly good. And I think the objects are dirty enough. Carpet is brand new but why wouldn't it be... it's nice to have new things some times

Some minor tweaks would't do harm, so here's some ideas...
Somebody mentioned that the blue blanket on bed looks too saturated and I agree with that. But it's just a little too blue, so I wouldn't change it much. It can be new as well as the carpet. I think the reflection on TV screen is fine but maybe screen itself could be a little less dark. They are kind of grey aren't they? And there's some light bouncing of the walls to show it...

Only thing that really bothers me is the radiator which look somehow flat. But maybe it's just different kind of radiator that I'm used to.

Don't mind my comments too much... Bottom line is that this is one helluva render and I'm really envious. Can I now go out to that warm summer sunshine, please?


P.S. It would be great to see a little bigger render if one exists. This has so much beautiful detail that suffers from small size and jpeg compression...
 
Old 08-07-2004, 09:29 AM   #39
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Excellent job, comrade!

Although our compadres seem to dislike the contrast of your colour choices I myself think they're quite appropriate. Living spaces are always works in progress; When I first saw this image I thought: poor student with a few hand-me-downs/gold finds, but knows when and where to spend cash to make a nice clean place to live.

I'm not sure if anyone else noticed this; but the room isnt modern, is it?
Everything has that 70s feel to it, but everything's new. That and the commie poster...

Anyways; Good job; I wouldn't change much.
 
Old 08-07-2004, 03:01 PM   #40
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Thanks

I thank for the comments.
Can you be right that the blanket has strong contrast
And is not entered in a little stage, though earlier at me was
Such dark blue blanket therefore I have chosen this shade.
The radiator though also seems white actually he has yellowish
The shade with a rust, truth on small картинке it is not visible,
Likely it was necessary to make a rust more sated,
The screen of the TV certainly should be grey but I have made
By his(its) darkly green...
 
Old 08-07-2004, 09:01 PM   #41
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Very nice enviroment, i see there is a curtain rail, why isn't there a curtain? Laundry day? If i was living in that room, i would like a curtain to cut out the light. Other than that great job.
 
Old 09-04-2004, 12:28 PM   #42
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Great textures, and excelent light! I think the blue bars of the bed should be changed, and the radiator (togheter with the pipes) should be more yellow. Otherwise, great job!
 
Old 04-25-2005, 09:09 AM   #43
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what about lighting?

Hi man... looks really nice! Im interested mainly in lighting. Im working on similar scene now and still cant reach proper lighting. Did you use only sunlight + GI or also some extra lights to improve it? Are there any post-touches or its pure rendering? Thanx for reply.
 
Old 07-27-2005, 11:19 AM   #44
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Thumbs up very great

The story is very intersting.very summy.I like your picture.
 
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