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Old 07-21-2004, 05:49 AM   #1
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Old 07-21-2004, 07:18 AM   #2
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In this old room there live young people (not so probably rich), but they have found a few money to bank of a paint to paint a ugly rusty radiator and to buy some bottles of vodka that on ancient Russian custom "to wash" repair of an apartment
 
Old 07-21-2004, 07:23 AM   #3
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i think the texture of the bed doesn't match with other things
do it with more dirty textures...
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Old 07-21-2004, 08:08 AM   #4
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Well I do not know... Any a bit too fine and strange remarks. That the battery pure, a bed not dirty...
 
Old 07-21-2004, 09:47 AM   #5
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looks very good to me. how about a larger render ? i agree some things could be more dirty..
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Old 07-21-2004, 01:58 PM   #6
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- It looks great!
- I really like the trash can and the ceiling.
- The material on the TV case is a bit strange.
- The radiator is a little too "white"
- The bottles on the floor are a nice touch.
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it doesnt need to be more dirty

i think its perfect!
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Old 07-21-2004, 02:30 PM   #8
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the carpet is too flat, you have the corners flipped up but there is no wrinkles in it. I think the window is a little hot, very white. All the props seem seperated and not unified by anything. Some of the shadows seem too soft and things seem a little floaty. Everything seems perpendicular with the walls. maybe offset some of the things a tad to make it feel less steryl.
 
Old 07-21-2004, 02:53 PM   #9
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Nice lighting! good one man
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Old 07-21-2004, 03:29 PM   #10
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i envy your skill in lighting. one thing though, outside the window is too bright. other than that, great work!
 
Old 07-21-2004, 03:45 PM   #11
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saw that on 3dtotal...great feeling coming out of this picture
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Old 07-21-2004, 03:50 PM   #12
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Could you post some wires and some lighting setups for this masterpiece?
 
Old 07-21-2004, 04:23 PM   #13
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i like the way the room filled with the sunlight, no complaints there. The reflection on the TV is a little too pronounced, most glares off televisions tend to suffer a lose of clarity and color by the time they reach such a distance.

good job otherwise.
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Good golly! That is a beautiful render. My only crits:

The rug is apparently brand new. (I guess they just bought it ) maybe if you pulled the saturation back a bit on the rug and on the blue blanket/sheet on the bed. These 2 items really stand out in an otherwise *PERFECT* render.

Incredible work. Great job.

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nice texture and feel....

the shelf on the left wall......is there some shadow required there considering the direction of the light source?
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