|03 March 2004||#34|
Artist In Motionportfolio
Professor of 3D Animation
Digital Media Arts College
Boca Raton, US
Re: Character : Lizardhunter
Quote: Originally posted by Eklettica
Thanks, in no particualr order to Alberto, Oistein, Jason and all the friends and collegues which supported me
What do you think this is, an awards show? LOL! j/k
Very nice work man. Nice details.
"Dreams are the stuff legends are made out of." --
|03 March 2004||#38|
The Proton Manportfolio
Saif Ullah khan
Co-Founder and Creative Art Director
hello .. nice work man.... its pretty impressive
but i see some serious problems with it like....
Neck is not right....
The distance between the two eyes is not right...
The relative size of the arms muscles is not right....
Over exposure of the light at head area does not make sence....
face texture is not right seems to be plastic compared to the rest of the body...
anyway..... no offenece.....critqued in good faith
|03 March 2004||#41|
Che succhio ...portfolio
Los Angeles, USA
Ok fellows, thanks to you all for the crits and the appreciations.
I frankly agree about the unnatural holding of the bag, i`ll try to make it more believable, maybe adding a shoulder strap.
I`ll even try to make the face texture more detailed,less plastic as someone suggested and to improve a bit the skin in general, although the goal of this work was not really to obtain something photorealistic, but something more illustrative and evocative.
Tarnishing the belt`s elements is a good point too, i have to admit they seem too much polished right now, compared to the whole "dirt" of the picture.
Humm...what else... NEIL observation is interesting, although my original concept included that "EAR" in the elephant elmet, anyway, thanks for the suggestion.
AZRAEL : Yes, i`m surprised that only you noticed that resemblance instead of pointing to some holliwood`s actor, it`s
more or less the same face model of Vega
|03 March 2004||#43|
The pic is great, some minor points are off - the chest looks a bit strange, shouldn't look so embossed right below the neck. The scar's too flat on the other hand. The eyebrows... are these photoshoped? I really like 'em.
Oh, and isn't he a bit fat?
|03 March 2004||#44|
3d artizanal space pirateportfolio
Raul Joshua Teleki
excellent stuff dude.
i like the modeling, the only prob i see is the face that is smaller than the body proportions giving your char a cartoonish look.
f.e. the chin is too small.
morally intact in 3d space
and as homer once said: DOH!
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