07 July 2013 | |
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Inspire
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K.W
Lighting TD
Copenhagen,
Denmark
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Great modelling and texturing, I like the composition of it.
As for what could be improved, then I believe each objects in the scene suffers from looking like they were using almost the exact same shader, but with a different textures. Take the Chain Saw for instance, it has no metallic feel to it, it's all just texture. Same goes for skin etc. Hope my critique is useful for you to improve on. Regards |
07 July 2013 | |
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UAB "OKTA" CG artist
portfolio
Arnas Gaudutis
3d artist
Filippo Loreti
Vilnius,
Lithuania
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Very nice models and texture work, its just sad that almost everything looks like same material : cloth=skin=leather=painted metal.... need to define more separate materials. Although environment looks nice. Funny idea too
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08 August 2013 | |
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Frequenter
portfolio
ZhiPeng Song
Freelancer
Shanghai,
China
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Originally Posted by knekker:
Great modelling and texturing, I like the composition of it.
As for what could be improved, then I believe each objects in the scene suffers from looking like they were using almost the exact same shader, but with a different textures. Take the Chain Saw for instance, it has no metallic feel to it, it's all just texture. Same goes for skin etc. Hope my critique is useful for you to improve on. Regards Thank you for your suggestions, materials actually processed is relatively simple, I will gradually revise and improve him. __________________
Email:niubiclass311@163.com |
08 August 2013 | |
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Frequenter
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ZhiPeng Song
Freelancer
Shanghai,
China
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Originally Posted by Dodgeas3d:
Very nice models and texture work, its just sad that almost everything looks like same material : cloth=skin=leather=painted metal.... need to define more separate materials. Although environment looks nice. Funny idea too
![]() Thank you for your suggestions, materials actually processed is relatively simple, I will gradually revise and improve him. __________________
Email:niubiclass311@163.com |
08 August 2013 | |
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New Member
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Hemant Kumar
3D Visualizer / Character Animator
delhi,
India
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3dvfxarch
very interesting and awesome work......
_______________________ 3D Rendering, best Architectural visualization, 3d animation services |
08 August 2013 | |
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Veteran
portfolio
ali seirafi
digital artist
Tehran,
Iran
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good
good work... great sculpting....
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08 August 2013 | |
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Freelance grafiker
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Alexander
Grapgic designer, freelance grafiker
Fotology.dk
Frederiksberg C,
Denmark
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Haha great work and nice very funny
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09 September 2013 | |
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New Member
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qiongyao he
chengdu,
China
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09 September 2013 | |
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New Member
portfolio
qiongyao he
chengdu,
China
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where is my avatar?
You have a good job! |
09 September 2013 | |
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New Member
BOB
NA
Montreal,
Canada
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Awesome!
Awesome, that i really cool concept and work
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09 September 2013 | |
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New Member
portfolio
United Kingdom
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Really impressive, the idea, the modeling, the level of detail, must have taken ages! Really cool. Only small thing id say is the overall brightness is pretty high, its missing a bit of black levels. But maybe thats just me.
Really love it, congrats. |
09 September 2013 | |
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If we are children, we can stay in the time of the place, sit together while listening to stories that never grow old while slowly Haoshou I forgot what day of the month in which the wall where I carved a faces a sad smile, staring at my face after those engraved in the back will not be as concrete floor love the flowers out of the immemorial no Runescape Gold wind in the forest. not every endeavor will be fruitful, however, every harvest must strive, it is an unfair proposition irreversible. When you really love something when you will find language how vulnerable and powerless. Text and feel forever estrangement. Forgetting that we should not change the fate of everything is not aligned like all the drawings back to the former than in the past extended little by little so slowly stagger to perhaps stagger the things we really should be forgotten. What happy? Is to cover up their grief for everyone smile.
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10 October 2013 | |
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New Member
portfolio
Fynn
Copenhagen,
Denmark
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Awesome athmosphere!
I love the lighting and feel of the scene. The characters have a lot of expression too.
I think I would add a more metal-ish texture to the dark-grey metal bars of the counter. They look a bit too smooth. Also it would be really nice to see the "cashier's" hands handing out bills to create the start-focus point on the left and lead the viewers eye to the right afterwards. cheers, Fynn |
10 October 2013 | |
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Modoist
portfolio
Trung Le
3d Modeler
Montreal,
Canada
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Masterpiece..very original.
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10 October 2013 | |
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Stereolithography
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Robin Beer
United Kingdom
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Clever work
I like how you tell a story in your scene, and such a great selection of different characters. I don't know who I would chose to read my child a bedtime story
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