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05 May 2011, 02:55 PM
Hi there, constructive criticism is appreciated and welcome. Thank you.

Jordan Zabady Demo Reel 2011 (

Lightwave 3D
Adobe After Effects

05 May 2011, 04:57 PM
Hi. First, the tool models are not good at all, I would ditch them completely in the reel. Also, if possible, re-render some of your most contrasty scenes with better lighting. Your strongest work is the rooster, the mt pleasant commercial thing and your animation pieces. Id remove the noised grass on the first roosteranimation and make all the rooster anims with the same color grass and sky. And maybe the living room model can be used more upclose ?

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