Lost Adventurer, Aleks Kirilenko (3D)
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View Full Version : Dominance War V - 3D - Deja - God/Godess of Nature

03-20-2011, 07:01 AM
hello all, this is my Dominance war WIP thread.

In addition to updating the thread i will be posting the latest progress at the top here:


good luck all, go CGSociety!!! :beer:

03-21-2011, 03:26 AM
hey all, posting some sketches and thumbnails ideation type stuff of stuff of where i am at right now.

id love to hear feedback if you feel like it.


03-21-2011, 03:29 AM
another one, sorry forgot about this one, kind of the most recent version.


03-21-2011, 04:44 AM
nice concept
best of luck with the Godess of Nature :cool:

03-21-2011, 06:45 AM
Stunning designs dude! Particulary like the second one of the first batch, and the third of the latest one. ;) Best of luck.

03-21-2011, 12:07 PM
Brilliant concept! I like the first one left in your newest concept and would merge it with the flying array/wings design from your first concept and replace it with leaves. They could also serve as a weapon more or less. Keep up the great work!

03-25-2011, 07:31 AM
hey all!

so here are some more thumbnail type designs. ive switched gears now and am trying to convey the power and beauty thing with more of a queen sorceress type vibe rather than a tree mech suit :p

so please let me know what you think.

03-25-2011, 08:29 AM
Harr... now I see we had similar thoughts...but I guess that's the nature of the theme. Anyways, doesn't matter I hope we won't end up arguing who had this or that idea first (will post my concept soon (and I will stick to the "tree-suite"). I really like your concepts especially number 2 of the new ones, the crown is very majestetic. Since I had the same problems keep an eye on the pelvic area cause the green-grass-stuff below her belly button easily looks like pubes coming up her belly :D

03-25-2011, 01:57 PM
This is right up my street!
My favourite is the bottom left of the 'sorceress' look. If it was me, id combine the torso of the bottom right with that one next.
Will definitely keep my eye on this!

03-26-2011, 06:49 AM
thanks LOLIverrr for the input and feedback!

and also thanks a lot CGRAM

thanks GaeasHerald for the feedback and suggestions

Darkonerster thanks dude!

im glad you are liking it so far.

here is more updated thumbnail design ideas. I feel like im lacking more and more recently, so im going to take a bit of a break for tonigh.

I'd love to hear what you all think.

Larger version Click HERE (http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9156/thumbnails03.jpg)
Larger version Click HERE (http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9156/thumbnails03.jpg)

03-27-2011, 12:09 PM
These are rad thumbs, man. I feel like the rose idea works well graphically, but the tree idea is a more powerful statement. Does that mean anything to you?
Nice gurls, btw.

03-27-2011, 11:03 PM
Sketches are great, Love your designs! I really like how you incorporate the rose as a "head-dress" I'll be following your progress and can't wait to see what comes of which ever design you decide to go with! Good luck!

03-28-2011, 06:44 AM
Daniel - Thanks for the feedback. the strength part of strong and beautiful is what im struggling most with. I felt that putting a girl in a big tree suit just felt like too short of a step to take, and was a little too literal in a direction im not sure i want to go with. as well as distracting i feel from a strong and powerful woman not just a powerful suit.

Speranza - Hey man, thank you for the feedback, hopefully i can bust something good out!

ok CGSociety, help me out!

here is my latest version, not all of the ideas are put in, i hope to not give you the wrong impression or waste time with such a wip. But i am not sure of what works anymore, which way is up!!! :banghead:
so i wanted to show you all this in its unfinished (and barley started) state to get a feel of your impressions and hear your input.

things to keep in mind: She will have strong arm piece like before, like a gnarley spikey tree, but with a lyrical sort of art nouveau bending vines down the middle.
again sorry for asking you guys about such an unfinished thing, but i gotta get to modeling and i feel my brain derailing!

03-28-2011, 09:17 AM
oeeeeee? rose is cool!! wonderful

03-28-2011, 09:18 AM
oeeeeee? rose is cool!! wonderful

03-28-2011, 09:21 AM
oeeeee! rose is cool!! wonderful

03-28-2011, 10:55 PM
another interesting piece i will watch ;) i liked the version with all the tree features the most.
from your new thumbs nr 6 and 7 are looking cool.
i just would take care that she doesn't look too much like an "ordinary" elfish magician. upper part is nice but bottom part too generic.

nevertheless cool stuff!

03-29-2011, 02:46 AM
Wow awesome crazy idea, love the rose head !

03-29-2011, 04:36 AM
alright guys, thanks for the feedback. im getting a sense of what you are all liking and am going to be up all night tonight to get something done!

03-29-2011, 01:25 PM
I really like your concept and where it's heading. I can't wait to see it in 3D.

03-29-2011, 01:58 PM
Nice concept dude .................

Dominance War V (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=330&t=968109)

03-30-2011, 09:32 PM
wow cool thumbs,
I like the tree concept, having a human figure fused to the tree could be interesting.

03-31-2011, 04:46 AM
Although I do like sketch 2 and 6 of the most recent I much prefer direction of the initial sketches, particularly the third posted image. It was very otherworldly but had a lot of strong natural grace and beauty...especially that pose and angle.

There will be a lot of entries of humanoids in dressed up garb, so be sure to keep it as unique as you can.

good work.

03-31-2011, 07:11 AM
thumb 6 with the rose is neat to me because it is cool but also could be seen as an object (the top of a cloak or something) so it has a reason to be there.

03-31-2011, 04:13 PM
Very nice work. I like the way as in nature she seems to still be growing and evolving.

04-04-2011, 12:53 PM
Love the flower(s) on the head. looks amazing so far

04-10-2011, 01:52 AM
hey all, so i took what you all said and put it in the thinker a bit. this is what im calling my final sketch of now, ive tried to incorperate elements i felt you and i felt were working into a more mystical strong other worldly character and less of a boring like witch or something. so im roughing this stuff in zbrush and ill post that in a bit to get your feedback on what it looks like in 3d. thanks!
bigger version (http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/4397/naturesketch06.jpg)

04-10-2011, 07:35 PM
hello hello. so here is my mockup. everything is pretty much there sept for some odds and ends maybe. but let me know what u think.
from here im planning to do a paintover and try to get as far with realizing the design in 2d so i can confidently finish the 3d. right now a lot is relying on how this is executed so experimenting in photoshop will be cool. if you have any ideas let me know.
bigger version (http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/8562/naturesculptwip02.jpg)
bigger version (http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/8562/naturesculptwip02.jpg)

04-18-2011, 04:20 AM
hi all. sooooo not so much progress as i wanted but here ya go

im gonna start sharpening sections up now cuz im burning out on trying to figure the design out. so hopefully once parts are actually flushed out others will make more sense in context and so on...

04-22-2011, 04:35 AM
I wonder what materials are? Wood? Stone?

05-07-2011, 10:58 PM
updates! thanks everyone for showing interest in my entry and stickin with it and giving me feedback. This is getting to be a crunch now but i felt a major redesign or at least major thought needed to be injected in my entry. So after dozens of little thumbs and doodles and studies I've ended up with a character that i am really excited about so please let me know what you think.
i'll be leaving these concepts on the front to as kind of a chronicle, these are few concepts arranged to make my train of thought make a little sense visually.


05-08-2011, 02:09 AM
Man I really dig your art! Really liking the direction this is going, do you think you will finish in time?

05-08-2011, 09:27 AM
i really hope so! so for now i'll say damn right i'm gonna finish.

05-08-2011, 02:56 PM
Right on brotha! Keep on truckin' then, I would really love to see this finished!

05-08-2011, 05:14 PM
beautiful new design concepts!

05-08-2011, 06:10 PM

Qute a turn around! ^^
I hope you manage to make it in time.
It's looking awsome.


<Dominance War V - 3D Character Entry> (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=330&t=969213)

05-11-2011, 04:53 PM
4 days 22 hours, design finished, hi poly 20%. IS THIS STILL POSSIBLE!?


05-11-2011, 04:58 PM
extended 7 days!

05-11-2011, 10:19 PM

Now you have plenty of time extra! I am counting on seeing this one done now so you know. :)


<Dominance War V - 3D Character Entry> (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=330&t=969213)

05-12-2011, 10:46 PM
I really love your designs.I'll be following your progress

05-13-2011, 12:13 AM
thanks all, i should have the hi poly all blocked out before i sleep today. any feedback on the design, or things you dont like or would like to see to make her badass would be realy helpful. man im running behind!

thanks again

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