View Full Version : New short "Susi"


ivanlobon
10 October 2010, 06:03 PM
Hi, this is my new short. I hope you like

http://www.ivanlobon.com/zipeados/Susi.html
http://www.ivanlobon.com/zipeados/Susi/Imagen_1.jpg

http://www.ivanlobon.com/zipeados/Susi/Imagen_2.jpg

Youtube link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlitIEP2XNc

best regards
Ivan

CSherwin
10 October 2010, 06:54 PM
it's cute. nice work.

i liked the tree backgrounds, really nice depth. a little heavy on the blur maybe, but it fits the camera style. i think occasionally you should have pushed the main character out of focus to indicate that the camera was following her and having to catch up. it would help reinforce the style.

i liked it.

Wiro
10 October 2010, 06:58 PM
Excellent stuff. Works so nicely with the music.
Plugged

Wiro

homer4lyfe
10 October 2010, 07:12 PM
Fun style. Good Job.

birkov
10 October 2010, 07:23 PM
Very good work Iván, is good to know about you after some time.

Saludos y sigue así :cool:

selwy
10 October 2010, 08:02 PM
Great work!
Best regards, Selwy

d8D
10 October 2010, 10:00 PM
Superb. Some great character motions there, especially at the beginning. I'm watching that again :thumbsup:

maik-anton
10 October 2010, 10:21 PM
nice story nice work

PurpleRainbow
10 October 2010, 10:31 PM
nice short. very sensitive. good animation style

tuffmutt1
10 October 2010, 10:56 PM
loved it...very unique idea.

KOryH
10 October 2010, 11:54 PM
man that was sweet.
I am glad there wasn't some joke or evil twist at the end.
lovely from start to end!

tinytimw52
10 October 2010, 03:43 AM
Nice work! I am jealous! My favorite part of the video was the facial expressions on the character..haha

Keir3D
10 October 2010, 04:16 AM
Great animation! So delightful. BUT.... (sorry to be picky)... Occasionally I found the leaves in the wind to be very distracting. Especially at 0:44. As the leaves moved along the frame, they synced up with the frame rate and appeared to remain stationary and slowly rotate. This destroyed the fast, fluid motion of the wind for me. If you randomised the leaves and perhaps added some motion blur then it wouldn't stand out and I would have nothing to complain about :)

But apart from that, NICE WORK!

-Keir-

rabbitpenny
10 October 2010, 04:16 AM
A literal breath of fresh air. Watched once for the story and twice for the style.

ahmad-O
10 October 2010, 04:53 AM
Very nice this girl :)
I loved your work

JackZhang
10 October 2010, 05:34 AM
one of the best two minutes i've seen so far. Brilliant teaching materials for all my animation students who plans crazy story for their 2 minutes. excellent use of music.

5 stars and kudos.

niEt0
10 October 2010, 06:59 AM
Brilliant!, short, nice and very well done :beer:
You can start a new one... we all want some more! :scream:
5 stars

Kinght
10 October 2010, 07:12 AM
I'll write a comment here .. ^^ .. good job, congrats for the front page !!

Cheers !

simypetar
10 October 2010, 08:13 AM
very very good idea i like it the music with the work is very nice , b&w i think wonderful look like this work

keep on & good luck

Ballo
10 October 2010, 08:26 AM
Excellent! muchacho!. Good work! Ivan. :applause:

ivanlobon
10 October 2010, 08:36 AM
Thanks you for watched I am glad you like it!

Best regards
Ivan

Drakky
10 October 2010, 08:38 AM
¡Genial! Love it... :applause:

Ivan.... es extraordinaria la capacidad de producción que tienes... eso es constancia. ¿Cómo consigues acabar los cortos, man? :bowdown:

PurpleRainbow
10 October 2010, 08:50 AM
very sensual short. liked very much :applause:

SciFibrow
10 October 2010, 10:13 AM
That was really cute!

I love the environment, it's very evocative.

julienN
10 October 2010, 11:03 AM
awesome short, very simple and so fresh, it gave me a big breath of oxygene.
thanks for it! :applause:

noizFACTORY
10 October 2010, 01:39 PM
I loved it! Heart warming, great style and animated to the music perfectly! It reminded me of old black and white French films. All the best to you! :bowdown:

IestynRoberts
10 October 2010, 02:06 PM
That was lovely! I really liked her walk - it had really nice character to it.

Great style, and well done for an awesome job!

podperson
10 October 2010, 04:13 PM
I love it. I really like the way you've captured the feel of floating in the wind, and I particularly like that there's no lame punchline. It just is.

Beautiful.

Jaimote
10 October 2010, 04:13 PM
Hi Ivan:

This piece is great, congratulations for your front page.

As I said before, great job:

Jaimote

Dennik
10 October 2010, 04:14 PM
Very refreshing. The animation and style works very well with the music.
Great work!

aghill
10 October 2010, 07:05 PM
Wow. I loved it!

You did a really amazing job at telling a small sweet story! I love when a story-concept shines through like that - a thing every shortmovie should before anything else.

Good job!

TheOutsider
10 October 2010, 11:45 PM
Beautiful idea Ivan!! Really good job...I love the animation style.

Keep it up!

cg-cnu
10 October 2010, 06:12 AM
wow.....nice look and feel dude. The animation is great. The expressions of the characters are nice.

etherboy
10 October 2010, 07:15 AM
Great!!! very nice!!! I hope to invite you to some beers when we meet again in Madrid for your awesome work.
Congratulations
Nico.

Pepnoi
10 October 2010, 07:50 AM
I really like your taste, a very nice piece of animation with a wonderful mood. god job dude

ivanlobon
10 October 2010, 08:09 AM
Thanks for all comments! :love:

Nico, I live in Madrid now. Venga esas birras!!!

Best regards
Ivan

opendesigner
10 October 2010, 10:30 AM
Ciao Ivo!!

Excellent stuff!! I loved it!

Me ha encantado!! Bellissimo!! Cuando nos vemos a por unas birras amigo? :D


Espero te vaya todo bien!


Hasta pronto


Max

brunomacedo
10 October 2010, 07:37 PM
Nice!! I like when people keep it simple and make it work. That´s exactly what you´ve done!!
Loved the music too!

Cheers!

megazor
10 October 2010, 08:34 PM
Amazing work, Ivan! Lovely stuff on your homepage as well! :)

bentllama
10 October 2010, 08:00 AM
nice stuff bro. way to step up and inspire your peers.

caktusbill
10 October 2010, 02:22 AM
Good job man. Sweet character and history. It reminds me the old moussel and "vamos a la cama" spanish ads... very nice.

theflash
10 October 2010, 10:12 AM
man that was sweet.
I am glad there wasn't some joke or evil twist at the end.
lovely from start to end!

Totally agree about the end. I think it was very sweet. And excellent choice for music.

WyattHarris
10 October 2010, 02:43 PM
Dare I say magical. Very cute, I'll show my daughter tonight. She will love it.

Georgie
10 October 2010, 11:23 AM
Very original in story and a very effective use of DOF. :) Enjoyed it.

aboullous
11 November 2010, 01:27 PM
gorgeous! gotta love the smile on her face :)
Where's the music from?

ivanlobon
11 November 2010, 09:46 AM
thanks for all comments!!

aboullous:
the four seasons Autumn, Vivaldi


Cheers!
Ivan

endi
11 November 2010, 03:59 PM
very very very cute!

pfistar
11 November 2010, 02:44 PM
Beautiful stuff! At risk of sounding pompous, I'd say it's "sensitive to animation history" - I love the Old World feel.

muiki-parot
11 November 2010, 01:36 AM
very cute ! ^^

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