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10 October 2010, 12:58 PM
Well I better start with a quick introduction.
I started learning CG in Dec 09 so that I could eventually break into the industry.
Im trying to put together a portfolio to get into a Computer Arts course at University, and learning new things at the same time.

I thought id show two of my previous works and what im currently working on.

Which is Hi definition model of a terran marine form an old game called "Freespace"

(you can see the actual mariens in this cutscene

Id very much like some critique as to how this appears to be progressing and also how my other work stacks up.


10 October 2010, 09:36 PM
I liked both of your finished works.
The lightsaber is very good. Good textures and low poly :)
But I don't see the other part of the saber. The one with the blade off.
It's a gray area and pass to black.
It may be due the lightning settings of your render.
About Darth Katan, the only thing strange is the hand. It doesn't seen that he's holding a weapon. It seens that the weapon is pasted in his hand, like an action figure.
About your wip, there's something strange in the biceps.
Can you post the wireframe of the model?

10 October 2010, 11:04 PM
About the lightsaber.
Its just inappropriate camera positioning on my part.

This wasnt the double bladed version but the battle damaged single bladed.
Ill get a wireframe up tomorrow as its 12:10AM.

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