View Full Version : Short animation film - Action - (( JUST A DREAM ))

10 October 2010, 09:17 AM

Modeling Time : 2 weeks

Anamation Time : 1 Month

Render Time : 1 Month

Video Editing : 3 days

Video Time : 2:19 Min.

Used Progs.

3D Studio MAX 2010 64x

Adobe After Effects CS3

Adobe Photoshop CS3

Film Story :
A girl sitting in cool sun light and enjoying some music ,, and suddenly an aircraft attacks her and explode any thing in front of it and the girl will die in the end of the film .
BUT ..
all events of the film was Just a dream and the girl will wake up :)
and the aircraft will be just a toy ..


Some Shots







Video Link :

Enjoy it :thumbsup:

10 October 2010, 11:57 PM
hello Mostafa
good work Mostafa in general.
u have done hard work as modeler, render, animating, and directing.
it's a lot for one person to be prof. in all
sorry for my words but "u want to concentrate on one thing to be prof. in it "

my opinion for animation only
-slow in and slow out is missing
-when she stand up she looking at "floor" and turn around that good motion in turning and poor in standing :beer:
- missing shoots when she start to run u (may facing prop. to start the run)
-good anticipation when she jump but not perfect planing
-u change the direction of running good too
-the last jump may would have some more anticipation .
-the plain motion very poor
-the end shoot (when she wake up ) missing arcs, missing staging and missing overlapping.

may the professional animators here can advise u more

10 October 2010, 02:37 AM
thnx v much humo

" it's a lot for one person to be prof. in all "

good notes and i will do better in the future in sha2 ALLAH

imp note : This is my first video in 3D MAX and AFTER EFFECTS

i mean that good result as a first time in animation , modeling , lighting and more in MAX

generally ..

thank u about ur notes :)

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