LC #42 Pipers Alley

View Full Version : Dakota swan about finished requesting critic

10-04-2010, 03:20 PM
She is a futuristic vampire commando.

just need some critic.

10-06-2010, 04:47 AM
very nice.

The background however needs perspective seperation it doesnt flow with the foreground character.

10-06-2010, 06:07 AM
I'd get rid of the "Dakota Swan" in the pic. It's distracting. The rest of the painting looks awesome though. Though I feel like the painting could be a little more refined (i.e. not so blurry in spots).

10-06-2010, 01:40 PM
Up date

I've crisped it up a bit, but don't know what to do with the background :banghead:... any suggestions.

The title was random so it went.

dose the skin in some places look a little dirty "not red enough"?

Up dait
I think I'm going to call this one finished.

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