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06 June 2010, 05:36 AM
( is the second seated version of redback one for long distance travel. Its basically a couple coming under the west gate bridge after traveling across the frozen over Bass Strait due to the Ice age. Everyone is heading north to get to warmer climates. High wind areas like the bass straight is perfect for this kind of wind powered vehicle.

06 June 2010, 05:53 AM
Heh heh sorry your story threw me for a second then I noticed your location. You have a marvolus soft touch that is beautiful. My only critique would be to increase the size of your subject so that it becomes the prominate part of the piece. Not sure of my terminology but I think you have what is called a Large Scale Composition where the enviroment is the primary element and I think (again I could be totally wrong), for this contest you might need a Small Scale Composition where the "Human or vehicle" is the primary element. Again very nice piece.

06 June 2010, 06:51 AM
Yeh I did it as a project, more focus was on the story in the picture. It was meant to be in Melbourne. Lol about the West Gate, were you thinking, "That does not look like our West Gate."
I don't really know about the guidlines havent had a chance to look over it yet. If I make that drawing big a few imperfections might show up lol.

06 June 2010, 02:46 PM
for now the girl looks like main, most eye attractive object in the scene, maybe make her suit more syd style, more futuristic.

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