I'm making another attermpt at the open book, this time I used this as reference:
I accept all crits that I got from c4dCafe, but I'd stress that I do all this 3D stuff as a hobbyist/beginner. I hope this will be accepted.
Of course, I realize that none of the crits is personal, after all, u don't konw me.
The book seems like a good example of learning, and so I persist.
Here's a fresh one. I tried my best to pay attention to all details.
Hope u like