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04 April 2010, 03:58 AM
Hey Guys,

I would really appreciate some feedback and critique on my pencil tests for these various animations! Also any advice you have for a beginner animator would be great! Thanks!

04 April 2010, 02:02 AM
I love how you give character to anything that you animate. Even that box - an inanimate object - has human qualities! It reads well so keep up the good work.
The only thing i noticed that seemed off was the base of the lamp. Its volume changes as it jumps in the air but it's just a minor detail. Im being picky :)
Great work overall!

04 April 2010, 10:03 AM
Really nice! only one thing, in the animated sac at moment of the jump as if his feet were glued on the floor and then when hi tuch the ground i would try to do less bending but too compressed. What do you think?

I don't know if I wrote well in English, sorry...

04 April 2010, 04:21 AM
Great! Thanks guys! I really appreciate the feedback!... I can definitely see what you mean with the lamp in the air, as well as with the feet on the flour sack! Thanks again! It always helps getting a fresh set of eyes to look at it!

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