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lucasgraciano
09 September 2003, 12:38 AM
Thank you for the feedback everyone!
Someone requested some color on my amazon girl. Let me know what ya think.

http://lucasgraciano.com/art/character-06b.jpg

SIGIL
09 September 2003, 01:28 AM
:buttrock: VERY nice man. I love it. :buttrock:

wedge
09 September 2003, 01:32 AM
i think you might wanna rethink the position of the face. it looks a bit awkward, like she's got a super long neck or something.

other than that, very nice work. good, dynamic pose. good proportions, good coloring.

Sky_DaBomB
09 September 2003, 02:02 AM
For a second I thought this is Disney's Tazaan :D

kariefury
09 September 2003, 02:49 AM
Hey I like your concept alot. The head's in the wrong spot though. I think it should be more to the right.

bumskee
09 September 2003, 02:49 AM
hey, really like it.
agree witht he comment about her neck. also her left arm is rather too skinny..her bum looks great though!
:beer:

Terro
09 September 2003, 05:19 AM
Neck? what neck all I can focus on is her rear. Marvalous:eek:

phoenix
09 September 2003, 08:04 AM
well done dude....very nice......u put life into the sketch

masterbird
09 September 2003, 09:32 AM
ya..i agree..
the head is not attach to the body..
looks wired..
but the color is ok..

Self-Designer
09 September 2003, 12:20 PM
Does her head connected to her breast? ;) yes, her neck...

And maybe add details unless u want to leave it ruff...

Anyway, nice dynamics! :thumbsup:

Philipstraub
09 September 2003, 01:08 PM
fresh and original...godd job

lucasgraciano
09 September 2003, 10:04 PM
SIGIL- Thank you!

wgeddes- I got a lot of the too long neck thing, so I adjusted it and replaced it. Thanks for the reply.

Sky_DaBomB- I'll take that as a compliment!

bumskee- Thank you for your reply. I adjusted her head, but I felt her arm was OK.

Terro- Thank you for the commnet, try to control yourself.

phoenix- Thanks for the reply and the "life" you see in it.

Artist 3D- I adjusted her neck. Thank you!

Philipstraub- I'm glad you like it! Thank you for responding.


Thanks again everyone!

lucasgraciano
09 September 2003, 10:06 PM
Thanks guys for replying. The image now is the new one and I've adjusted the head. Thanks again!

Self-Designer
09 September 2003, 10:10 PM
Dunno if u updated it in the forum, but it's way too far... I'm not sure we are able to see her face from that prespective - which makes it a bit a big problem....

Gena
09 September 2003, 08:08 PM
Nice! Im thinking movieposters from the 40-50ies. :thumbsup:

Sinkywinky
09 September 2003, 08:32 PM
The right hand looks rather wrong.

fizzgig
09 September 2003, 07:52 PM
nice colors. i miss the linework, though. you should maybe try a multiply layer of the lines

charlie brown
09 September 2003, 08:10 PM
yeah the heads off, but well rendered :beer:

hercanic
09 September 2003, 10:31 PM
Dear lucasgraciano:
A good start, but...how many fingers does her right hand have? I like the unique pose you've got her in. Her hands could benefit from some definition, though. Keep developing this, you're on the right track. Good luck!

jeroentje
09 September 2003, 08:32 AM
I merged your thread from the 2D wip forum into this thread.
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