View Full Version : Yet another head WIP
01 January 2002, 11:44 AM
here goes, been around for a while and thought I'd post an image, made with patches in max , textured in Pshop with Texporter. It's for a short animation that I'm working on.
Tell us what you think.
www.schizographic.co.uk (http://www.schizographic.co.uk/head 11.jpg)
01 January 2002, 04:17 PM
I like it! Is it just a head or do you have a body attached?
01 January 2002, 05:06 PM
I guess no one one really cares about heads anymore, or at least mine or yours. Yours is defintely not worthy of a "0 reply", so here goes my critique: 2nd head (I'm assuming that it is the same as the first just a more recent update) :try varing the bump a little more over all the head, areas like the forehead and above the lip could use a smaller pattern to them. Very nice grotesque appearence, and nice colors. Love the veins popping on the forehead too! Perhaps a little falloff could be added to soften the skin just a little. The lips also has a odd deformation at the corners. The eyes need a little more owk too but it is a WIP! Nice work, could you post a non blured, and a cage so readers can see it a little more clearly?
And visit my head too ;) http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=777
Yeah I took so long that it has become a 1 reply oh well :)
01 January 2002, 02:45 PM
Wow! Seriously, one of the coolest character faces I've seen. I agree about the bump map some parts could be more subtle. I could'nt see the first image. Would like to see more of this guy. He oozes evil. Terrific model.
01 January 2002, 04:38 PM
Freaky!!! But very cool! I like the renders!
Build him a body. (I'm sure you already know that!)
01 January 2002, 04:38 PM
I really like them and I apreciate the fact that they're very stylised (uh, is it English ?). I agree with the boys, the texture need more work.
Keep posting, really interressant stuff ! :)
01 January 2002, 07:19 PM
very nice model, realy great expressions!
the veins on his forehead look like he hasn't been outside or at least not in the sunlight for a while.
- In the close up, the upper eyelid looks a bit strange, maybe you could add a fold going inwards the head (excuse my english, I hope you get what I mean)
- The eyes also look a bit unfinished in the close-up, in the other views they look ok.
- You should also considder adding some wrinkles on his forehead an below his eyes.
01 January 2002, 10:27 AM
Thanks for the comments, v helpful, and when I get the chance I'll work on the textures. I don't think I'll get the chance to work on the mesh anymore. He was supposed to look like one of my illustrations, rather than super realistic, and I think he does what he's supposed to (look sinister and sad). Next time I'll work with mesh/poly not patches!
I've been got a couple of updates here
also here's an mpeg (2.5MB), just playing around with the morpher modifier.
morph test (http://www.schizographic.co.uk/morph4 test.mpg)
Let us know what'ya think
cheers again guys
01 January 2006, 01:26 AM
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