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alaa-afifah
03 March 2010, 07:14 AM
hi first i want to thank my god for this then i want to thank peter starostin for his character how i developed thim just little and i want to thank mohammad bahbouh for compositing info.

in this short movie i try to achieve high quality of body machine and i hope i success with that

i do all material in this short movie.

your vote and comment are very important.

Software i use:
3dsmax&After effect.

you can watch it on the following link.
http://www.vimeo.com/10095000

http://i650.photobucket.com/albums/uu230/alaa-afifah/poster.jpgthanks for watching it

zildasoft
03 March 2010, 10:52 AM
wow great animation +
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trafamwa
03 March 2010, 12:59 PM
That is a good job my friend keep going

zecas
03 March 2010, 02:44 PM
very good animation :thumbsup:

eyad
03 March 2010, 03:08 PM
nice work.. keep it up.

ALBARON
03 March 2010, 05:05 AM
Well done, man :thumbsup:

alaa-afifah
03 March 2010, 07:27 AM
thanks for all of you

maxspider3000
03 March 2010, 03:34 PM
actually, am really impressed ... great level of work man - masha Allah-

I forgot that am watching an animation and enjoyed with the story and nice acting ... you did it well :)

your direction skills getting better and better ... even if there are some shots need a second look, but it looks fine at all

keep going dude, I can see you will a great animator one day -insha Allah- :D

thrillhouse196
03 March 2010, 08:48 PM
great job! the animation was really well done. I thought the Camera moves and angles worked really well too.

alaa-afifah
03 March 2010, 06:42 PM
thank for all of you i really appreciate that this is to much on me

JoshKirk
03 March 2010, 05:54 PM
Your sense of weight and timing is AWESOME! the camera angles were cool but some could use some work or maybe just not so many? And on the little chase scene after he gets out of the tree, the runs for both characters are kind of the same and it doesn't look like they are trying to run as fast as they can, almost like they are jogging. But I only noticed that small little thing because all the animation before and after it was so great :) Good job!

Aben-Athar
03 March 2010, 04:40 AM
Great job man! The natural born killers animation is also fantastic. Your timing is flawless!

alaa-afifah
03 March 2010, 08:58 AM
Josh Kirk: thank you to much i saw your spider animation its short and nice

Aben-Athar thank you to much and i also saw your work his is wonderful ...

Costa3Dart
03 March 2010, 12:43 PM
excellent man !!

bravo

Imaver
03 March 2010, 03:14 PM
Amazing work :thumbsup:

nikiataa
03 March 2010, 07:03 PM
vary vary gooooooood man you are perfect in animation :buttrock:

alaa-afifah
03 March 2010, 08:24 AM
again thanks for all of you guys....

hussamhf2
03 March 2010, 06:13 AM
Realy this is amzin animation & very simple characters

nice effects thanks for your gift

*****

Mostafa14
03 March 2010, 11:31 AM
Go ahead and don't let anything stop you..

alaa-afifah
03 March 2010, 07:22 PM
hussamhf2
Mostafa14

thank you guys i really appreciate that

bala2007
03 March 2010, 11:12 AM
Awesome animation really. I see you ontop soon. How long did it take to animate the characters?

mahmoudcg
04 April 2010, 02:36 AM
great skills! keep up

Glacierise
04 April 2010, 07:49 AM
It made no sense to me at all, but - great animation dude :)

keraj37
04 April 2010, 08:11 PM
hehe exacly, It has no sense, but animation MAN u will be on top soon I see u in Pixar:) I just loved to watch it:]

cheers

colus
04 April 2010, 11:25 PM
Very impressive! How long did it take you to make this?

alaa-afifah
04 April 2010, 08:39 AM
thanks you guys and you are right with what you say i was have to work on the story more than this

and for How long did it take you to make this?

actually its to hard to calculate the time because i do it in my spare time after work some day i work and some not

but approximate 2years and half
in discontinuous time

blinn1
04 April 2010, 11:15 AM
perfect animation,, great work

BasheQ
04 April 2010, 07:13 PM
amazing work man
keep it up:buttrock:

alaa-afifah
04 April 2010, 08:04 PM
thanks for all of you guys

harmonic01
04 April 2010, 10:09 PM
Wow. Very nice work especially considering how long the piece is. Great job. :D

naza0222
04 April 2010, 10:40 PM
very good animation .

alaa-afifah
05 May 2010, 08:16 AM
Wow. Very nice work especially considering how long the piece is. Great job. :D


peter thank you to much and thank you for give us this your nice character

alaa-afifah
05 May 2010, 08:18 AM
naza0222 (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=244812)
thank you man

bahaa-saleh
05 May 2010, 08:45 AM
Hey my friend this one are great i think it's completely done and you override all my critiques for the animation.really you are from the best in this field. i loved how you start the film especially the contribution between the Sound track and the entry camera in the jungle it's amazing. also I loved the blue character in the first Film hi is so cute. the story are so funny...
and yes...yes i searched and i find just one critique...:wip: ... the tilling ground on the battle ground ...never mind.
i know that you worked so hard to complete this amazing film and i think that you did it.
keep it up my friend you are from the best...Good luck.
Beast regards...

Your student Bahaa Saleh.

alaa-afifah
05 May 2010, 01:16 PM
Hey my friend this one are great i think it's completely done and you override all my critiques for the animation.really you are from the best in this field. i loved how you start the film especially the contribution between the Sound track and the entry camera in the jungle it's amazing. also I loved the blue character in the first Film hi is so cute. the story are so funny...
and yes...yes i searched and i find just one critique...:wip: ... the tilling ground on the battle ground ...never mind.
i know that you worked so hard to complete this amazing film and i think that you did it.
keep it up my friend you are from the best...Good luck.
Beast regards...

Your student Bahaa Saleh.



thank you my friend and for your sweet words.

Ryonosuke11
05 May 2010, 03:11 PM
GREAT character animation! I'm amazed at your animation skill 0_0 the characters really did seem alive ^_^ Great work!

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