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02 February 2010, 01:06 AM
Hey guys I will start an open thread to post WIP from my sketchbook.

I do hope you guys like it, and I am looking forward to your comments.
-Roberto Ortiz

This is my Latest Sketch:

I am doing a series of girls for a series of girl characters I am doing.
Next is Astro Girl

02 February 2010, 03:23 AM
Here is the fitst update for Space Girl:

02 February 2010, 04:03 PM
Hey Roberto, nice to see you posting work! First of all, you have great rendering technique with pencils, it really brings out the details of your characters. I do have a few thoughts on your first 2 ladies-

Pirate girl- she has some super-strong looking abs....maybe a little too much bulging? Otherwise a very good character.

Space girl- Great details on the suit althought her hips do not seem to have equal size/weight. Her left hip should stick out a bit more. Also, for all the space gear she is wearing she looks very skinny.

One other thing, you might try showing the girls in different poses that help distinguish them from one another.

Anyway, I love the idea...looking foward to updates sir!

02 February 2010, 04:45 PM
Not sure if the green pants work well in the pirate girl image.

I like that monkey! :D

02 February 2010, 10:19 PM
Cool entries Roberto...and welcome :) I look forward to seeing more work from you. BTW, I like your idea about a book club. What a great way to make the DSF educational.

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