View Full Version : Animation: Littel piece
08 August 2003, 06:41 PM
I made a littel piece to practice.
I'm waiting yours critiquice
08 August 2003, 06:59 PM
rofl ... wt* ??? hehehe :hmm: well i enjoyed it for sure..
i was already anoyed with that left guys attitude..
good thing that happend to him.. :surprised
also have audio version ??? i kinda missed that...
08 August 2003, 10:42 AM
the gag doesn't really work cuz we've seen it in Monster's inc. If you're going to copy a gag, it should be better thant the original or have a good twist.
The comedic timing on the whole thing is not too good because the characters are too small to get a good look at them before the punch line so that ruins the joke as well.
And finally the guy's fall has a pop, which draws attention away form the gag and onto your animation skill.
I'd say give them a more humoristic entrance to begin with...with a shot tighter on the bodies where their attitudes are clear. And the gag should somehow be more constructed. That's for you to think about.
But it is a good practice for sure, i think you got it.
01 January 2006, 01:00 AM
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