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01-11-2010, 12:34 AM
I'm a young students, and i'd like to know what u think about thoses draws, if u like it or not, or if u have some critiques. We want to make a little video game with friends, and we are starting 3D.
here are the backgrounds:
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3610/patrtieagricole.jpg (http://img27.imageshack.us/i/patrtieagricole.jpg/) http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/patrtieagricole.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img27/patrtieagricole.jpg/1/)
I can't put more pictures, but i will put caracter design and more barground if u want...
plz, tell me if u don't like, and then tell me wy u don't like it
hoping for return
01-15-2010, 02:40 PM
damn, there is no ansers..plz, i'll just like to know what u think about the univers, cause i'm going to make a little damn game in this map, with peoples. Then i would like to know what proffetionnel or begener, or just humains thinks about it, if this univer can talk to them or not.
But maybe i strarted badly, cause i didn't said the usuals things : i'm new in this forum, but of cours it made a long time i've been watching all the biutifuls creations who most of them comes from a lots of masters for shure! and i realy enjoy it!
I know my pictures are bull cheat in technical application,(no real textures, lights not worked, perspective is not perfect, etc...) and for shure i'd like to heard things about it for myself working in progress. but i'd like to have opinion for my team, if we can go, or if we sould change things before.
and sory for my damn bull cheat english ;)
thanks for watching and thanks a damn lot for awnsering what evers it is
01-15-2010, 09:09 PM
I think these images are really very cool. I'm always impressed when someone can convey a sense of mood and environment with relatively simple brushwork. There's probably a tradeoff between doing a fully detailed still and a bunch of quick environment sketches to really illustrate an idea; your approach seems to be the latter but the I wouldn't mind seeing how they progress with some detail (maybe just a selectively placed thin stroke or highlight here and there). Since it's for a game design, I could see these being adequate to start building your environment. Keep up the good work, I like the feel of this environment, light and airy. Looking forward to see this project progress!
I think you got some very nice drawings here. The perspective is creative and the athmosphere is great. I have nothing to crit except that I'd like to see more detail and I'd love to see some of them as finished paintings. :)
01-16-2010, 03:08 PM
thanks u so mutch for thoses reply encouraging!!
y shure, i sould make more details, cause they are a little bit primitive for the moment..Here i have one i spended more times, then with more details, but it is not realy finish to unfortunatly...
i'll put to my first idea for this world and a plan, with no color, just to situate places...
i'll can put the caracter design, who come from an other man, if u want. the idea is to play an attack of the village: A bad race attack buy the skye with flyings machines. the concept is u can play the tankinous (the nice peoples living there and using some kind of magic energie), or the forks, some bad peoples, living far of there with a mecanical powerfull technologie.
I can show u to the avancement of 3D if u want. but this is primitiv for the moment. We want to use our own engine, creating at this moment by a very powerfull canadian!!
hope we'll make funy game!!
01-16-2010, 03:08 PM
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