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12 December 2009, 06:40 PM
I have been working on this short with a few other guys for 4 months. Let me know what you guys think!

12 December 2009, 05:26 AM
Pretty good story.

Who is this for? What audience?

If it's for kids I'm not sure Jazz music is the best, and it needs to be more expressive.

The character design isn't bad either.

The water really needs help, it took me a while to get that they where in water, I thought they were aliens for a while.

I'd keep going on it. Rework everything cause the story could be good, but the layout is bad and the passing is boring.

Study Hollywood camera works and Richard Williams DVDs.

Learn how Pixar does there films.


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