View Full Version : Character: Male head, Adam

08 August 2003, 10:00 PM


I was hoping I could get some critique on my new head-model.
Considering I havn't modelled for some months i think it turned out rather nicely. However, after staring on this model in 3dsmax for quite a few hours i fear I might have gone blind :)

Gimme some pointers!


08 August 2003, 11:24 PM
Looks good overall. The first thing I noticed was that the folds under the eyes looked pinched. Soften it up a bit.

08 August 2003, 02:42 AM
Great modeling!!!!!!!

One minor thing I noticed was that the eye lids seem to be a little too thin, needs more fleshiness!

I also noticed that the eyes look slightly too far apart. Looking at the space between them I get a sense that this is not a natural bone structure. IMHO

Great geometry arrangement, though I might get rid of a few of those tri's...if you want :)

08 August 2003, 06:50 AM
if you softened the nose bride it would look like his asian. :shrug:

08 August 2003, 03:57 PM
good modeling,lovely lips
what it dosent have is character...
its eyes are dead,i think thats whats missing,i cant define it
but it shows...try to mess around with the eyes,the distance between them,their size,their shape...

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