View Full Version : discouraged rabbit dialogue (wip)

08 August 2009, 02:42 AM
please feel free to critique and comment


08 August 2009, 04:08 AM
I like the concept.

The ears on the rabbit seem to be doing some other shot. :)

There are patches where the arcs on the hand movements seem well thought out and other parts where it's still moving straight in the air.

The big arc where his hand travels to the rabbit's chin may be a bit too grand. It's almost like he's serving a volley ball. A more intimate gesture might do better.

the big shrug by the rabbit would benefit from overlap on the head vs. the torso. It woudl make him seem weightier.

I realize this is a early draft and not all polished yet. I think it's a promising treatment. This must be an 11 sec club clip?

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