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06 June 2009, 02:23 PM

I attended a Gobelin 2 weeks master class recently. This is one of the 2 clips that i am working on. A short 6 sec clip of a character and it's prop.

If you see anything that is not working out for you, please feel free to drop your comments.
All critics are welcome!

Thanks alot!

07 July 2009, 07:24 PM
Looks good. I would maybe hold the embarrassed expression a bit longer before going to sad, or at least slow the transition down.

07 July 2009, 04:07 PM
Hey yo! Thanks alot for your advice. I will work on the embarassment to the sad part. Really appreciate it. Thanks again!

07 July 2009, 04:12 AM
Hello everyone, here's my latest update. I've been working on my other clip, so didn't update this one. Anyway, here it is , please drop me your comments, really appreciate your thoughts.

Thank you!

07 July 2009, 10:40 AM
Lastest updates :) I paid attention to the details of eye movement and facial expressions. Also held some of the poses longer and work on the fingers. Please write me your comments, or not I may just finalise this clip.

Hope to see your response!

07 July 2009, 08:24 AM
Looks good , i have two things , first part looks slow , u can tighten it by 20%, U have around 24 frames for the turn .U can easily offset the hands when he gets shocked (around 4 secs on timeline). the body ,head and hands are moving together.


07 July 2009, 07:37 AM
Hi Karan, I did thought my beginning was rather slow, thanks for your comments. :)

07 July 2009, 08:14 AM
Hi eveyone,

here's my lastest update

i tighten the beginning part and overlap the part where he got shocked. I have watch a lot of times, and i can't really spot my mistakes. I hope you all can help me up.


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