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05 May 2002, 05:57 PM
:bounce: Hi!
this is my first post here...
What do you think of the render? (be honest... we donŽt know each other!!!)
It is made in Lightwave 7.0.
Hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

05 May 2002, 08:33 PM
Great work man keep it up :)

05 May 2002, 09:01 PM
the modeling looks good.

the texturing needs work. The skin is too shiny and the beard and eyebrows are completly flush with the skin. Needs some bump mapping.

05 May 2002, 06:39 PM
Thank you!
IŽll try also to make the scene a bit more interesting by adding more elements.

05 May 2002, 10:49 PM
vry nice but keep working on it and make it more detailed.
you can use a portrait photograph as a guide.

Good Luck

05 May 2002, 10:59 PM
1-use a rflect map in your material if you be careful it will make a very excelent result.

2-use photographed maps for head skin.

3-make eyes more glassy.

4-use DOF in your render and use Tele photo lens in your camera.

5-after rendering adjust the image contrast and correct the color balance in a Shake or After Effect or ...

Best wishes

05 May 2002, 10:07 PM
Thank you for your positive crits. Very helpful, because sometimes it is difficult to "see" what is the thing that does not fit.
As soon as I improve the model IŽll re-send it!


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