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05 May 2002, 05:02 AM
This is my first post. I'm not sure it belongs in this category or on this board, but I thought I'd give it a try and see what sort of response I get.

My latest cartoon is here:

It stands alone, but here is the first episode in the series:

Both are about 1.6 MB

Let me know what you think. Thanks!

05 May 2002, 12:05 PM
I think world 2 is really great allthough I think the plot missed some real ground pounding humor and subtleness, but is has a great feeling of originality and the animation skills are really okay!

World 1 had a great soundtrack but the music missed the action sometimes, I had the feeling that I was wachting some sort of music video than really watching some sort of short.... It missed a plot....!

Anyway great work and keep it coming!!!

05 May 2002, 01:02 PM
Thanks for some good constructive criticism, Sangotten!

btw the first episode was done as more of a stream of conciousness piece, so that's why there isn't much of a plot.

05 May 2002, 04:45 PM
those are really great! and inspiring ^_^ did you also write the music? hehe nice flix~

05 May 2002, 06:31 PM
paku: the music was composed and performed by Craig Martin (guitar) and David Lindsey (everything else).

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