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06-12-2009, 03:45 PM
Richard Spriggs is entered in the "Secret Agent" update: View Challenge Page (

Latest Update: Finished Video: The Runner (

06-15-2009, 05:43 PM
Hey Richard,

Didn't know you were on CG Society. Awesome. Really looking forward to seeing what you come up with as well. Good luck.


06-19-2009, 07:36 PM
Hey Everyone, So I think I am going to have a fast paced, action type of animation. I really like the parkour style, a really good example is,
also Mirror's edge is a good example.

I was thinking I would have my main character stealing something important from the government. Such as incriminating information, a Virus, a DNA code, etc... Basically something that could bring down the government, or stop the government from doing something bad. This would lead into a chase sort of scene of him running away from them. Not quite sure of the outcome yet but will keep thinking about it.

Let me know If you have any cool ideas to work off.

Thanks, I look forward to seeing all your entries.

06-20-2009, 03:35 PM
Hey Richard,

Maybe check out the Bourne movies. I don't remember which one, but theres a great chase sequence in it which would be great to reference both for the animation and camera work when following someone doing crazy stunts. Just my two cents. Good luck.

06-21-2009, 04:18 PM (

Idea for the action sequence, I'm going to have him break down the door and break past the guards.

06-21-2009, 04:20 PM (

Just a stairway where the chase will continue.

06-25-2009, 12:19 AM (

1) Opening shot, walking up to Bank doors.
2)Runs Past Security guards at front
3)Goes into circuit room and locks door behing him so security cannot open it.
4)Starts pulling a bunch of wires apart destroying everything. Looks at Camera in the room and it powers down
5)Busts out of room with security getting knocked down.
6)continues the chase upstairs
7)runs along the rooftop
8) gets to edge of builing and as there are tons of security after him he phones someone.
9)Cut to one of the security guards on phone at front robbing bank, makes off with all the money through the front door
10)Runner jumps off building to the next one. Security can`t make the jump

07-03-2009, 12:48 AM (

Software: Maya

One of the action scenes. I hope to have around 4 or 5 good action shots.

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07-03-2009, 01:09 AM
Wow...that's looking very impressive! Some great choreography you've got going on there :)

My only comment in that the soldier who's head he grabs and slams down has a reaction that's a bit slow after he jumps over him. These soldiers look like they'd be highly trained, so I'd imagine their reactions to be really snappy.

07-03-2009, 01:17 AM
Hey thanks Tyson. Your right about the reaction of the guy. I will try to sharpen it up when I have the time. By the way, loved your short last time.

07-03-2009, 01:23 AM
oh yeah! this animation looks greate!

you choosed best scene for reference

07-03-2009, 02:40 AM
Yeah Man, animation is looking real nice. I'm digging that Parkour style. Good Job

07-03-2009, 07:29 AM
Awesome! I agree with Tyson about the snap of the first soldier. Perhaps to make his slow reaction time more believable tho, you could have his head bounce a little as it hits the door...that combined with a nice 'CRACK' sound could look and feel really painful, and lead to his disorientation.

I'm definitely looking forward to more!

07-03-2009, 07:47 AM
Really Great Animation!:buttrock: Thats will be a Powerfull entry! Nice action.
Best to you!

07-03-2009, 10:54 AM
Looking nice. good paceing. :)

07-03-2009, 05:00 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone.

07-05-2009, 02:33 AM
it looks like this one is going to look very good. :thumbsup: can't wait to see more.The models look like they were made very well,good work.

07-05-2009, 03:46 AM
Wow! This is awesome. Very good work; animation is superb. Really looking forward to seeing more of your entry.

07-18-2009, 03:19 PM (

Running up some stairs heading toward the rooftop.

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07-18-2009, 03:24 PM
This chase is just getting better and better! The skid before the stairs is really good.
Keep them coming mate.

07-18-2009, 06:38 PM
great animating!!

so good - moves,timing,energy,smooth and everything

only one thing im thinking about, can i ask why the 'swat' guyz dont have guns ?

07-19-2009, 03:05 PM
Thanks for the comments

Thanks for the feedback, the only reason I didn't give them guns is because I wanted it to be a chase not a gun fight. I didn't want people to be saying "why dont they just shoot him?" I thought the action would be better that if the guards have to keep up with him in order to catch him.

07-19-2009, 07:20 PM
This is great stuff! Can't wait to see more! :applause:

Best regards, Varun

07-20-2009, 01:56 AM
i like what i see! keep it up! :beer:

07-20-2009, 06:22 PM
Hey Richard!
this is looking great!

07-27-2009, 12:23 PM (

The first scene in my animation.

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07-27-2009, 11:34 PM
Really nice work. It is an excellent set up shot because you can see the story of what happened just moments before but leaving it for the imagination to fill in. Love the police lights, really gives it a sense of suspense. Can't wait to see the final animation.


07-28-2009, 07:16 PM
Thats amazing Richard. Totally love this work!

07-28-2009, 09:10 PM

looks very promising so far. The atmosphere is really sensible, the animations looks very good and smooth.
I just think, textures are a bit plain and lifeless, maybe because there is nearly no specularity on them, for example the lamps or the case.

so long

07-28-2009, 09:55 PM
Great animation. Keep it up Richard, can't wait to see it all flow together.

Best regards, Varun

07-28-2009, 11:20 PM
I think this entry is looking really awesome so far! Love the clean look of the renders, and the animation is great!

08-02-2009, 03:22 AM
what fantastic timing there man, . Every second is very well thought out theres a real feeling of tension and energy in the scene.great stuff Richard!

08-03-2009, 03:03 PM (

The render of the Hallway and the stairs.

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08-03-2009, 03:46 PM
Thats really looking good so far. How much more do you have to get done?

08-03-2009, 04:52 PM
very fluid and believable!
i love it

08-03-2009, 06:07 PM
I like the expression of the guy, the animation is are almost there man.

08-03-2009, 10:07 PM
Thanks again for the comments everyone. Everybody's stuff is really inspiring.

Thats really looking good so far. How much more do you have to get done?

I have lots to do, I have about 3 or 4 more scenes to go. I am going to have a fight sequence on the rooftop, so that will take a while to animate. I think when it's all done the entire short will be around 45 seconds. short n sweet.

08-04-2009, 05:47 PM
i like it! :thumbsup:

can i has moAr the shots?

08-04-2009, 11:51 PM
yes please more shots .
Thats looking great man, In the opening of the sequence , a dirt layer is tiling on screen right on the wall , just something i noticed ,everything else looks great surfacing wise, really nice level of weathering , not overdistracing at all. also wondering at 0:05 if he should extend his back and shoulders a bit further towards the stairs , he seemed a bit far away from the 5th stair he eventually steps on to. You can swear at me if i am not making any sense.

08-06-2009, 01:16 PM
Hey Richard,

Thanks for your comments. Your animation looks great. I am looking forward to seeing all of the shots.


08-06-2009, 03:35 PM
This stuff is awesome. Animations are impressive. Good luck!!!

08-07-2009, 09:55 AM
Get in, this looks mint! your animation work is awesome! awesome stuff dude, well done.
Cannot wait to see this piece finished. :) keep it up mate.


Ian S.

08-07-2009, 11:59 AM
Wow, just love it, cool animation!!


08-08-2009, 01:34 PM
Very impressive animation. It kind of reminds me of the Bourne Identity. I look forward to watching the finished product.


08-14-2009, 03:17 AM (

WIP animation where they run out onto the rooftop. The light you see is gonna be the helicopter light.

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08-14-2009, 03:44 AM
Great shot Richard. Reminds me of the one in the trailer of District 9!
Very cool work so far. :)

08-14-2009, 04:13 AM
i like it even moAr! :D a few things...the part where he shields his eyes from the spotlight didn't feel first i thought he did some type of wavey :wavey: i think you can strengthen this pose by using his forearm instead of just his these...

but other than that, i really like everything about it! :thumbsup:


08-14-2009, 08:20 PM
RedCigarette, Thanks, I appreciate your comments

Ragdoll, Thanks for the comment, I see what you mean, I was trying to keep his face on screen. I will see if I can make it read better.


08-15-2009, 10:31 AM
Richard3d - this is totaly awsome shot - looks great!!
Camera work is super. Animation super, modeling super - it will be super shot :)

08-22-2009, 02:53 PM (

Rooftop scene rendered out. Not much time left, I'm really feeling the pressure now. Everybody is doing a great job, really seeing some amazing stuff out there. Keep up the good work everyone.

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08-22-2009, 03:23 PM

That feels totally awesome!

08-22-2009, 04:49 PM
Nicely done, althought I think that spot light should be much more shaky. If it is on helicopter I can imagine that it would shake like crazy. You can see that in many movies.. can't recall any titles. :) At the moment hot spot moves too smoothly. All the rest is very good.

08-22-2009, 11:09 PM
This shot is realy cool. I like texturing very much - . Everything fits to this style.

Will You use some other composition work to those shots ? or it is final quality?
i guess dof is changing in very beggining of this shot - maybe this is not necacary,its looks cool anyway but... maybe if will have some time you can chack it how it will looks without changing focus from arm to buliding.


08-23-2009, 12:57 AM
Hey Richard, very nice work there... Your entry is very inspiring.

best of luck in finishing.

08-23-2009, 08:38 PM
Nice! Love your camera choices and timing...

The shakiness of the swat guy in the foreground is a little distracting to me... I know he's in a helicopter but I think it's maybe too slow of a shake... or too regular. Maybe both. Sorry I'm not great at describing what feels off to me. The rest looks awesome though!


08-25-2009, 05:22 PM
RedCigarette, thanks again

Pierzak, Yea the spot light is quite smooth, I agree with you, I didn't want it to be too distracting. I will take a look though if I have time at the end.
Thanks for the comments.

Staszek, Thanks for the compliments, I will see what it looks like without the depth of field change.

Syndicate, Thanks a lot, I'm glad you like my work.

Mikebot, thanks for the comment, I see what your saying, I will see if it looks better a different way.

08-27-2009, 02:18 AM (

I will be adding more buildings to the background, and also will continue the helicopter fog light.

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08-27-2009, 03:34 AM
Really nice animation. I know you wanted keep people from thinking "why don't they just shoot him." But, since you didn't give the swat guys guns I still just can't help but thinking "why don't they have guns." heh :shrug:. Just makes chasing him kind of pointless when they can't stop him.

Anyway, good job. :thumbsup:

08-27-2009, 04:54 AM
Awesome! Great choreography! :D

08-27-2009, 08:39 AM
very nice, smooth animation! grats.

08-27-2009, 08:43 AM
Looking great :)

One crit... the guy that swings the punch should probably do it just a little bit earlier... so its more fluid. I'm doing a similar bourne inspired sequence I guess, and I find that fluid action is the hardest part to achieve.

Anyway this is fantastic... You are nearly there :D

08-27-2009, 10:01 AM
You are a one talented animator.
Well done.

08-27-2009, 11:46 AM
nice animation ! im not sure that hero head pose is not to stiffly in those extreme moves but looking awsome anyway !!

08-29-2009, 12:06 AM
This is really coming along nicely.

08-31-2009, 06:45 AM
wow super awesome can't wait to see the final :)

09-07-2009, 07:54 PM (

Software: After Effects,Maya,Photoshop

Here's my final submission for the individual video category. It was a lot of fun working on this project, thanks to all who left comments and suggestions. Everyone's work is looking fantastic. I look forward to seeing everyone else's work finished, best of luck.

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09-07-2009, 08:27 PM
Amazing animation you got there! Congrats on finishing such a piece of work!

Really inspiring! and motivating! :D

09-07-2009, 08:44 PM
Very nice. Great character animation.
My only worry is that your final animation is about 45 seconds only...
Well done.

09-07-2009, 09:58 PM
Nicely done Richard, very tight :)


09-08-2009, 12:40 AM
Hi Richard,

This is really great work! Well done on the complex animated sequences. I like how the story gets loops back to the beginning scene. It made me watch it again a few times. I also like how you have shorter scenes as opposed to longer shots to keep in with the speedy rhythm of the animation. The sly grin at the end is priceless. :D Awsome.

09-08-2009, 02:25 AM
Great job! Turned out very nicely.

09-08-2009, 04:01 AM
Richard. Well done, congrats on finishing.

09-08-2009, 04:21 AM
Wow!! That looks really awesome!!

Congrats! :)

09-08-2009, 07:11 AM
damn good animation, well done! respect for such strong final entry.

09-08-2009, 08:13 AM
Yep ! piece of gooood work this.
Congratulations on finishing and good luck with judging!

09-08-2009, 08:32 AM
Really good animation! very impressive!


09-08-2009, 10:55 AM
Good work Richard, very very Nice!!:applause:

09-08-2009, 02:53 PM
Great work. The animation is really fluid and smooth. Really good weight to it, It's hard to get the timing when there are so many character interacting. I think you pulled off what you wanted to do, an animation which is fast, exciting and to the point. Quality over quantity. Really good work, good job.

09-08-2009, 08:01 PM
That was really cool!!

09-09-2009, 01:25 PM
awesome animation richard. timing and weighting are perfect. hope you win the contest..

09-09-2009, 04:00 PM
Hi Richard3d,

It is a fantastic work, completed on time. Animation looks great. Wish you all the best.

09-09-2009, 05:00 PM
Congrats, great job! Very nicely done!

09-09-2009, 05:03 PM
Wow, thanks for the great comments everyone, they are really appreciated. Makes all that hard work worth while. Thanks again

09-10-2009, 01:42 AM
wow , just fantastic work. congrats on finishing this , all the best with the judging.

09-11-2009, 05:21 PM
hay man,
Thanks for reminding me about crediting inspirations.
I thought that I would return the favour as I do enjoy your entry.
As much as I like The Runner for all of its originality, quality and greate choreography. I think that you should credit "Run Lola, Run" as it is in fast very similar. That will keep you from any trouble in case someone picks on it. All the best.

09-11-2009, 05:30 PM
I have never actually seen Run Lola Run, So any similarities are purely coincidental. Thanks though.

09-11-2009, 05:40 PM
Not at all. There is nothing wrong with redoing some movies or shots or being inspired by them. In many pixar animations there are references to other movies some intentional and some not (just similar). True Lies was mentioned by destruct007 at the beginnig of the competiton so its not a secret. Even if you haven't seen "Run Lola, Run" (greate film btw) someone might question it, but not now that you mentioned it that you didn't. Just wanted to help.

09-11-2009, 05:46 PM
I cant view the full thing on mine

goes about 10 seconds into it then just stops?

09-11-2009, 05:50 PM
I cant view the full thing on mine (
goes about 10 seconds into it then just stops?

I'm not sure why it's not working for you. Did you try giving it some time to buffer? Seems to work for everyone else.

Let me know if it works for you later.

09-11-2009, 05:56 PM
Works fine on mine.

09-11-2009, 06:01 PM
Fantastic work Richard! The animation and choreography are superb.

09-14-2009, 08:06 AM
Great Job! Wonderful Animation.

09-14-2009, 08:45 AM
I'm not sure why it's not working for you. Did you try giving it some time to buffer? Seems to work for everyone else.

Let me know if it works for you later.

working now. Not sure why it wasnt before. my cache maybe?

Cool anim by the way, animations are spot on dude. congrats. :)

09-15-2009, 03:23 PM
Thanks sknne77, teleliq, rsluman, and everyone else....
I'm glad you like the animation. I spent the most time on the animation side of things as I wanted it to look really fluid. It's also what I enjoy doing most.

Thanks again for the support

09-17-2009, 02:46 PM
Hey Richard,

Thats a great short. Congratulations on the quality work.

09-23-2009, 04:29 AM
I wasn't really following any of these threads (I don't know why - so much to learn from lol) but I truely LOVE your style - I remember you had posted another picture of your central character a while back, with a "what, it wasn't me" look and ever since then I've always wanted to see him animated.

You've done really well....and I truely hold your work in the 'this is inspiring, I better work my butt off' genre. Love the composition and camera angles used in some of the scenes and love the style.

10-09-2009, 03:16 PM
Congratulation to you and to everyone who finished :) :)

See you on the next challenge ;)

10-10-2009, 11:49 PM
A real well deserved win richard. I don't think anybody had any doubt about this win. Congratulations!

10-14-2009, 06:09 PM
Congrats, loved the anim.

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