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06 June 2009, 09:34 AM
Paul Haynes is entered in the "Secret Agent" update: View Challenge Page (

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06 June 2009, 03:36 PM (

Well here we go. My concept for secret agent. Here we have a seedy hotel room where the robot henchmen are bursting through the door. Before them is a desk with radio equipment...but under the desk is a bomb about to explode...e.g. dynamite with timer...hmm prob 005 seconds to go. In the corner between the sink and the open window is an open suitcase containing the outline of a rocket pack (a secret agent always needs one) and finally reflected in the mirror above the sink is a view out of the window with the secret agent making good his/her escape, using said rocket pack.

Good luck to all


06 June 2009, 05:07 PM
Nice idea,. I like the reflection in the mirror, and all the details you plan on adding to tell a story... I think you're next move should be to take a look at the camera angle. Try to inject more dynamism into the shot.

06 June 2009, 06:37 PM
Thanks for your comment Jack.

I agree that the image is too flat. I'll need to draw the eye from the left to the right to tell the story. First I'm going to create the basic models for the chair table robots etc then play with the camera angle. One idea will be to have the door off its hinges and therefore angled thus framing the left hand side (if you get my drift :) )

I'll also need the right angle for the mirror bit :)

06 June 2009, 06:59 PM (

An update to my concept...a change of angle. The story.....

Two heavily disguised robot henchmen from C.L.O.W.N the Criminal League Of Wanton Naughtiness break into a seedy motel room, just in time to see our hero escape using a standard issue rocket pack and to receive a 'going away' present...

Please excuse the simple sketch :) and I have to admit a feeling of deja-vu on using clown/disguised faced robots...

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