View Full Version : Charater : Deimos

07 July 2003, 03:06 AM
hi guys, this is my finished work, can give me some comments on how to improve it.(the foreground is a rush job).thanks.

07 July 2003, 03:15 AM
nice. I like it. but I think it would look better if he had a better expression on him, to make it look like he was snarling, or something.
also, I think it would improve the picture if there was more shadows and darkness, and less defined, too. in that environment, the light would be bouncing from all over the place.

just a few suggestions,


07 July 2003, 05:27 PM

good try!
but i think too much of blur effect dont work good!
did u wrote the word"hwang" in freehand???
try not to do that!

try some texture or put some dirt on the character!
looks more natural!!!!


07 July 2003, 02:33 AM
thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it, by the way the charater "huang" is written using tablet.

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